Was This Real Love?

August 15, 2015
By 13stars GOLD, Frisco, Texas
13stars GOLD, Frisco, Texas
11 articles 0 photos 13 comments

I thought this was love,
But little did I know,
It wasn’t love,
Not even close.

Why did you?
Why did you do this to me?
You remember that innocent girl,
Well that’s all gone now.

Yeah,
That is all gone.

Yeah,
All gone.
And it was you that took it.

Ohhh
Ohhhh

Why did you?
Why did you do this to me?
You remember that innocent girl,
Well that’s all gone now.

Yeah,
All gone.
And it was you that took it.

I thought it was love,
But little did I know,
It wasn’t love,
Not even close.

Why did you?
Why did you do this to me?
You remember that innocent girl,
Well that’s all gone now.

Yeah,
All gone.
And it was you that took it.

Now my brain is trying to rewire,
From that twist on love,
’Twas from your frame of mind.

Now I’m trying to start over,
But it isn’t easy you know.

Hard to get thru the sadness,
Even if it was about that badness.

I mean,
Shouldn’t it be easier to move on,
From a bad thing in life.
You know,
But moving on,
Is hard in real life.

In books and movies,
they show people getting back up,
and moving on.
All right away.
But,
You know,
As real as it seems,
That isn’t real life.
Real life takes its time,
Letting it take its true course.

I thought this was love,
But little did I know,
It wasn’t love,
Not even close.

Why did you?
Why did you do this to me?
You remember that innocent girl,
Well that’s all gone now.

Yeah,
All gone.
And it was you that took it.

Now my brain is trying to rewire,
From that twist on love,
’Twas from your frame of mind.

Now I’m trying to start over,
But it isn’t easy you know.

Hard to get thru the sadness,
Even if it was about that badness.

I mean,
Shouldn’t it be easier to move on,
From a bad thing in life.
You know,
But moving on,
Is hard in real life.

In books and movies,
They show people getting back up,
And moving on.
All right away.
But,
You know,
As real as it seems,
That isn’t real life.
Real life takes its time,
Letting it take its true course.



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13stars GOLD said...
on Aug. 24 2015 at 8:26 am
13stars GOLD, Frisco, Texas
11 articles 0 photos 13 comments
@NarutosimG @VM709 @thisEmilyda1 @MMickey I have 4 more song lyric poems up! Could you take a look?

13stars GOLD said...
on Aug. 23 2015 at 9:56 pm
13stars GOLD, Frisco, Texas
11 articles 0 photos 13 comments
@VM709 @thisEmilyda1 @13stars @MMickey @NarutosimG That is probably my favorite lyric. It really struck home for me. The song is about when I found out when me and my ex-boyfriend were together (and after) wasn't love. It disrupted my life when I found out. We threw words (and other things) like they were sharp knives and we were each others prey. Yeah, not the prettiest time of my life.

13stars GOLD said...
on Aug. 23 2015 at 9:46 pm
13stars GOLD, Frisco, Texas
11 articles 0 photos 13 comments
@thisEmilyda1 thanks for the feedback! I will look at them today or tomorrow! And yes, I have many more poems to get approved!

13stars GOLD said...
on Aug. 23 2015 at 9:39 pm
13stars GOLD, Frisco, Texas
11 articles 0 photos 13 comments
thanks for the feedback! I will look at them today or tomorrow! And yes, I have many more poems to get approved!

13stars GOLD said...
on Aug. 23 2015 at 9:37 pm
13stars GOLD, Frisco, Texas
11 articles 0 photos 13 comments
thxs! @MMickey

VM709 DIAMOND said...
on Aug. 23 2015 at 6:40 pm
VM709 DIAMOND, Ormond Beach, Florida
72 articles 7 photos 26 comments

Favorite Quote:
" I will never be what you want from me "

" Remember that innocent girl well thats all gone now " Really hit me . Beautiful work .

on Aug. 23 2015 at 4:50 pm
ThisEmilyDa1 SILVER, BF, New Mexico
6 articles 0 photos 101 comments

Favorite Quote:
only a life lived for others is a life worthwhile
-Albert Instien
the only person you should try to be better than is the person you were yesterday.

i like it and i agree with the other comments about changing the lyrics, but over all i think it was very nice. i wrote a few poems (they're not songs though) that i would really really appreciate you fed back, also if you want to read any of my sotries. thank you keep it up.

MMickey BRONZE said...
on Aug. 23 2015 at 4:06 pm
MMickey BRONZE, Stonewall, Mississippi
4 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
Words only come to life when you believe

I like it, it's good, but maybe change up some of the lyrics some? keep up the goood work! :)

13stars GOLD said...
on Aug. 20 2015 at 9:57 pm
13stars GOLD, Frisco, Texas
11 articles 0 photos 13 comments
Hey! Constructive criticism and critiques are welcome on any of my work! Also, any feedback would be great!

13stars GOLD said...
on Aug. 20 2015 at 9:46 pm
13stars GOLD, Frisco, Texas
11 articles 0 photos 13 comments
Thanks for the suggestions, @NarutosimG ! I will definitely take that into consideration in the future!

on Aug. 20 2015 at 9:43 pm
NarutosimG GOLD, Chicago, Illinois
10 articles 2 photos 55 comments
I like it but I think you repeat this"Why did you? Why did you do this to me? You remember that innocent girl, Well that’s all gone now. Yeah, That is all gone. Yeah, All gone. And it was you that took it. Ohhh Ohhhh Why did you? Why did you do this to me? You remember that innocent girl, Well that’s all gone now." a bit to much it okay if you want it to stay that way but I think you should change it up every time you say this line over or separate and then in the end put it back together that be cool. But it still a good piece.




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