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Shotgun

December 5, 2014
By smithmas PLATINUM, Felton, California
smithmas PLATINUM, Felton, California
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Favorite Quote:
sing like there's no one listening :)


Shotgun to the system
Keep me off guard
Keep that bullet sailing
Straight through my heart

Watch me turn away (from you)
In agonizing pain
But realize that I will never
Let you go again

Don't you try to stop me
You don't know what's right
Cause I won't walk away (from you)
Without a fight


The author's comments:

More song lyrics.. If you have any suggestions let me know! :)


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on Dec. 17 2014 at 5:36 pm
smithmas PLATINUM, Felton, California
20 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
sing like there's no one listening :)

Thanks so much for the feedback!

on Dec. 11 2014 at 9:14 am
WinterRose76 SILVER, Ok., Florida
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Favorite Quote:
Arise and be all that you dream - Flyleaf

Great song lyrics! I like how catchy and rhythmic they are. The only criticism I have pertains to the last line "Without a fight". It only has four syllables which throws the flow of your song off balance. If you added another word to make the line five or six syllables long instead of four it would sound much smoother. But of course that's just my honest opinion. :)