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Another day
Another struggle
Household an growed cold and I'm falling in the puddle
I tumble and fall everytime the world gives me trouble
And the pain hits me with a double
Man I'm tired of always putting everyone first
It's time I realize that in my eyes I deserve the best and dig my heart up out the dirt
They take your kindness for weakness and dirty up your shirt
But its over
I'm tired of being last
I'm bout to take these feelings and throw em in the trash
Suffocate this love in a bag
Look at what i got move on and put this present in my past
There's no more being last



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Sgalli said...
yesterday at 8:43 pm:
I admire how you can turn your emotions into a poem that gets peoples attention, and your not afraid to tell the world how you really feel through poetry.
 
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today at 10:10 am :
Thanks for comment
 
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nomistoo said...
yesterday at 12:34 pm:
I really like the essence of frustration in your poem, but the abbreviations and punctuation mistakes took away from the focus; ex: its should be "it's." Good job though!
 
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yesterday at 4:38 pm :
Thanks for comment and I recognized those errors after posting because this wasn't written, it came right from the mind. 
 
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Littlebunny said...
Mar. 30 at 7:23 pm:
I really love how it rhymes. Your emotion is clearily felt through this poem. 
 
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Mar. 30 at 9:49 pm :
Thanks for comment 
 
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