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Without Me

February 5, 2014
By SpringofSummer PLATINUM, Lewiston, Idaho
SpringofSummer PLATINUM, Lewiston, Idaho
34 articles 12 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
Giving up doesn't always mean your weak. Sometimes it just means your strong enough to let go.
Bloom Where You're Planted.


Haven't talked in forever
I feel..ok
Hope your doing better
At least better then me

It feels so hot
Yet so cold
I don't feel it anymore

That feeling inside
When something has died
It's holding on forever


Are you better
Do you feel fine
Are you hurting
On the inside?

Was it wrong for me
To keep caring like I do
Without me
Is like being without you

Do you feel it...?

(instrumental)

So tell me
Have you thought
About the past
About the one last thing

Can you see
Just the end
Or is it
Just
Another
Beginning?

Are you better
Do you feel fine
Are you hurting
On the inside?

Tell me what its like
To just let go
I only ask
Because i need to know...

Because we both know,
This never should have ended
Or started from what it did

Because we both know,
That even if i tried my hardest
You just left it lying

And all i ask is if it was true...

Without me. Your better off without me. Your better off...

*gone*


The author's comments:
A girl committing suicide because she was used, and felt like she wasn't enough.

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on Oct. 4 2014 at 1:28 pm
SpringofSummer PLATINUM, Lewiston, Idaho
34 articles 12 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
Giving up doesn't always mean your weak. Sometimes it just means your strong enough to let go.
Bloom Where You're Planted.

thank you ;-;

on Apr. 27 2014 at 6:21 am
Nella.Girl97 BRONZE, Ashland, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
"Keep on dreaming even if it breaks your heart."

whoa...this leaves me speechless with tears in my eyes! Impressive poem!