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My hope

The window is small,
its time to move on,
find a place where I belong,
you asked if I cared if I would still be there,
the truth is with you by my side,
I've never felt more alive,

you're the one who I Hold dear,
I know its not much,
But it's all that I have,
I give you my heart to have,
You've stolen my heart from the first time we met,
Is this true love? A fable? a bluff?

I look to the sky,
the stars up so high they twinkle and shine,
looking down at us they asked why,
I laugh out aloud and tell them flat out,
it was fate deciding our luck,

I know its unfair, I lead to despair,
But I look to your eyes,
and my cloak falls down,
down to the lies and secrets I held,
I'm an open book now haven't you tell?
for you are my world,
its rather unheard that there's anyone in this world,
Beside you.



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Midnight5765This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Aug. 4 at 11:06 pm
This is so far the best song lyrics I've read from you! After reading, I liked to combine the first and last sentences together to get, "The window is small/Beside you" because they go so well. Five stars :)
 
Hanban12This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Feb. 3 at 4:46 pm
I love this, Luna! The use of the commas is a great technique, and I love the way you described the stars :) Brilliant work, as usuaaaal :)
 
Janelle7This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 24 at 5:07 pm
Love it!!!!
 
WittyWriter said...
Sept. 21, 2013 at 5:16 pm
Wonderful as is all your work!!  Who did you write it for!?!?!
 
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