October

June 13, 2013
By getdude56 ELITE, Carlisle, Pennsylvania
getdude56 ELITE, Carlisle, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
Scenery is nothing more than poetry.
Love is nothing more than chemicals.
'Cause fairy tales are just scribbled pages filled with happy endings and little white lies.
One person can make a difference, but a crowd can make a change.


"Let's just be friends," she noted, disappeared and she lied to me again,
I'm so confused, what kind of relationship were we even in?
I'm getting stressed,
And I'm feeling so worthless. (So worthless)
If I had discovered how you truly act like you do now,
I would have never taken the liberty of asking you out.
Only time will permit me to forget you.
My heart aches and it feels like:
Bro-o-o-o-o-ken.
Bro-o-o-o-o-ken.
Bro-o-o-o-o-ken.
Bro-o-o-o-o-ken.
All the plans we made, you cancelled, I forgave you and shrugged it all off,
And every secret you kept from me, tightly concealed, proves we weren't in love.
I know you were too high-class even for me,
And that's what I'll never see, ever again...
And it's difficult to think,
How you gave up on us with just one blink.
I'm not the villain, I'm not the bad guy,
I'm just the boy who gave it a try, a perfect lie.
I find it eccentric that I'm the only one hurt,
My intentions weren't to keep you from your work.
But I sure hope you will remember,
Because I'm cemented firmly in October,
Every day.
All the plans we made, you cancelled, I forgave you and shrugged it all off,
And every secret you kept from me, tightly concealed, proves we weren't in love.
I know you were too high-class even for me,
And that's what I'll never see, ever again...
And it's difficult to think,
How you gave up on us with just one blink.
I'm not the villain, I'm not the bad guy,
I'm just the boy who gave it a try, a perfect lie.
La-la, la-la, la, la-la-la.
La-la, la-la, la, la-la-la.
I know we're not meant to be,
That's perfectly fine.
I'll get over it with time.
And hopefully in one year from now,
We can be friends, we can be friends, we can be friends.
I know we're not meant to be!
That's perfectly fine.
I'll get over it with time.
And hopefully in one year from now,
We can be friends, we can be friends, we can be friends.
I know we're not meant to be,
That's perfectly fine.
I'll get over it with time.
And hopefully in one year from now,
We can be friends, we can be friends, we can be friends.
We can be friends.
I know we're not meant to be,
That's perfectly fine.
I'll get over it with time.
And hopefully in one year from now,
We can be friends, we can be friends, we can be friends...



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on Jun. 16 2013 at 2:24 pm
getdude56 ELITE, Carlisle, Pennsylvania
473 articles 0 photos 118 comments

Favorite Quote:
Scenery is nothing more than poetry.
Love is nothing more than chemicals.
'Cause fairy tales are just scribbled pages filled with happy endings and little white lies.
One person can make a difference, but a crowd can make a change.

Thank you! (:

asofnow GOLD said...
on Jun. 15 2013 at 1:09 pm
asofnow GOLD, Troy, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
Nothing gold can stay ~ Robert Frost

I liked the repetition a lot :D

on Jun. 14 2013 at 2:01 pm
getdude56 ELITE, Carlisle, Pennsylvania
473 articles 0 photos 118 comments

Favorite Quote:
Scenery is nothing more than poetry.
Love is nothing more than chemicals.
'Cause fairy tales are just scribbled pages filled with happy endings and little white lies.
One person can make a difference, but a crowd can make a change.

I know. It usually makes sense once you obtain the rhythm for it. Awe, thank you! I'm gracious you could relate tomy song. "Hopefully in one year from now, we can be friends." It refers to when two people break-up, then can't be friends. Hopefully with time, her and I can be friends. I'm also glad that relates to you. (:

on Jun. 14 2013 at 11:52 am
CallMeAria PLATINUM, Vancouver, Other
30 articles 27 photos 73 comments

Favorite Quote:
EVERYTHING HAPPENS FOR A REASON :)

It's kind of hard to read song lyrics (I was sitting hear singing it my head) but, the writing itself was really good and I really liked this part especially:
And it's difficult to think,
How you gave up on us with just one blink.
I'm not the villain, I'm not the bad guy,
I'm just the boy who gave it a try, a perfect lie.
I find it eccentric that I'm the only one hurt,
My intentions weren't to keep you from your work.
But I sure hope you will remember,
Because I'm cemented firmly in October,
Every day.
I think that part had amazing flow, and I'd love to hear to be actually sung. I also love the last line "hopefully in one year from now, we can be friends" that one really spoke to me. :D


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