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Was Is My Interrogative

Where do I even begin
When, does this part of my life give in
Who, even gots the free time to listen, listen
[Whoa] My de-meanor’s dub-i-ous
Your rebut-tal’s how-it-is
Our dispute is in-e-quitable, inequitable, not compatible not compati-ble
What’s the purpose or the thought to try
[Thought to try] Why the rush you runnin’ out of time
[Out of time] Well, I’m gonna have to promptly leave again, again
[So] My de-mean-or’s neg-a-tive
[Whoa] Your re-but-tal is so prati-cal, so practical, paradoxical-paradoxical
Where, am getting myself into
When, did I realize I’m losing to you
Who, convinced to fight for the pro side-con is clearly the best
[Ahhh] What’s the your resolution so I can give my read
Why all the statistics-the ballot is so austere
How, did I bother to try this time-your case is slyly oppressed
[Lalala] Listen-listen to the word choice
Isn’t it so wisely chosen to match his girl voice
[Ahahah] Again-again the favor is not mine
Hey at least always do my outline.....
Where do I even begin
[Even begin] When does this part if my life give in
[Give in] Who even gots the free time to listen, listen
[So] What’s the purpose or the thought to try
[Try-try-try] Why the rush you runnin’ out of time
[Time-time-time] Well’ get ready I’m gonna leave again, again
[No] Where-when-who-what-why, used to be my alibi
Now was-is-my interrogative.
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KylineFThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
today at 10:29 pm:
i love the way it flowed but sometimes it didn't make much sence
 
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Liv.HarrisThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jul. 8 at 5:44 pm:
This flowed exceptionally well! Great job on the lyrtics btw! :)
 
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mnm08 said...
Jan. 30 at 10:56 pm:
That was amazing.  I can literally feel the rhythm and the rhyme and the whole time I was reading it, I imagined it as a song. That was truly well done! 
 
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Dr.SunbalSunnyThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Oct. 8, 2013 at 9:59 pm:
wow is how i describe this... its so inteces i dont eve kno how to describe IT! NICE WORK  
 
fallenoutofgraceThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Nov. 1, 2013 at 4:20 pm :
Very good! Very nice work! and amazing! three words that pop into mind
 
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Hi_Alison said...
Sept. 2, 2013 at 11:11 am:
Its like creative, with a dash of intresting only one thing left to say AW E SOM E!!!, SAID ALISON...
 
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LaChouetteThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 25, 2013 at 8:43 pm:
This is really nice. I'm not in Speech and Debate, but I enjoyed this. Nicely done!
 
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WhenYouCantSleepAtNightThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Aug. 12, 2013 at 7:10 am:
Its creative i like it haha (:
 
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MissExplorationThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Aug. 9, 2013 at 1:35 pm:
It's a little hard to understand for me since I am not in Speech and Debate. 
 
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MckayThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 5, 2013 at 5:32 pm:
I agree this poem is creative and clever all at once. A little hard too understand sometimes, but overall well done. 
 
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sophistryxo This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 31, 2013 at 11:09 am:
This is so creative! I love it! I took speech and debate this year and this is completely accurate haha :) you do a great job writing stream of conciousness! Great work!
 
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