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Thinking Of You

(Verse One)
Sitting here all alone
Thinkin' of you on my own
Wondering where you are
Hoping' your more near than far

(Chorus)
I'm always thinking of you
You make my life complete
Our love is so pure & bitter sweet
To be with you is my only destiny
So please, oh please
Come over here and be with me
Before I drive myself crazy
From thinking of you

(Verse Two)
I wake up late at night
When there is no one in sight
I lie there with you on my mind
As our love starts to be defined

(Chorus)
I'm always thinking of you
You make my life complete
Our love is so pure & bitter sweet
To be with you is my only destiny
So please, oh please
Come over here and be with me
Before I drive myself crazy
From thinking of you

(Verse Three)
Driving in my old car
Looking up at the stars
They shine as bright as your smile
And stretch out for miles & miles

(Chorus)
I'm always thinking of you
You make my life complete
Our love is so pure & bitter sweet
To be with you is my only destiny
So please, oh please
Come over here and be with me
Before I drive myself crazy
From thinking of you

(Bridge)
I love you even more
Than the whole entire world
I just hope you can agree
That we were sincerely meant to be

(Chorus)
I'm always thinking of you
You make my life complete
Our love is so pure & bitter sweet
To be with you is my only destiny
So please, oh please
Come over here and be with me
Before I drive myself crazy
From thinking of you



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KrasotaThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
today at 8:16 pm:
This could use a bit of work, but with a spot of love, it would be an amazing song! I love the foundation that you have set down here and just keep on building on those lyrics! :D Have a great day!
 
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Court901This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jun. 27 at 3:00 pm:
I really liked the idea of the poem. I do agree with GraphicWriter, though, about the verses and the chorus lengths. But the rhyming is good and so is the word choice.
 
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GraphicWriterThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 24 at 8:47 pm:
The verses are somewhat shorter than the chorus and it seems that they should be longer than the chorus. The inbetweens are a little weak, like they need supports and you seem to use the chorus' as those supports, but in my opinion they aren't the correct structure that is needed. It's a good start though
 
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