Done With You

April 20, 2013
By JRaye PLATINUM, Dorr, Michigan
JRaye PLATINUM, Dorr, Michigan
43 articles 10 photos 527 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you build your house far enough away from Trouble, then Trouble will never find you."

"Have you ever looked fear in the face and said, 'I just don't care.'?"


Well, there was a time
She felt beautiful
Her refection was flawless and
all her own

And there was a time
she wasn't afraid
to be different and make
dumb mistakes

That's when you got to her
Took her mind and her spirit
And she would cry at night
No one could hear it

Once upon a time,
nobody else mattered
She knew what she wanted
How could she have known?

How to block out the darkness
Keep out the bad stuff
Stay true to herself
Not become heartless

Instead she did what
she was supposed to
Dressed to impress you
Did what you told her to

Now she's done with you
She is done with you

Now, there was a time
he felt so strong
He took you on and
didn't force his smile

But then this one time
it all became too much
He gave into the demons
What had he done?

I guess you got to him
Took his mind and his spirit
He would die inside
No one would could see it

Once upon a time,
nobody else mattered
He knew what he wanted
He had no idea

How to block out the darkness
Keep out the bad stuff
Stay true to himself
Not become heartless

Instead he did what
he was supposed to
Dressed to impress you
Did what you told him to

Now he's done with you
He is done with you

You got to us
Took our minds and spirits
We knew we would be judged
So we kept quiet

You don't know what it's like
To have to lock ourselves inside
Until there's nothing left to hideā€¦

So we
Block out the darkness
Keep out the bad stuff
Stay true to ourselves
Won't become heartless

Instead of doing
What we're "supposed" to
Try something brand new
We will do what we want to

'Cause we're done with you
We are done with you

Once upon a time,
nobody else mattered
We knew that what we wanted
Wasn't to be you


The author's comments:
These are my thoughts on the world, society, or whatever you want to call it. Criticism is completely welcome. Enjoy :)

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JRaye PLATINUM said...
on May. 24 2014 at 11:56 am
JRaye PLATINUM, Dorr, Michigan
43 articles 10 photos 527 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you build your house far enough away from Trouble, then Trouble will never find you."

"Have you ever looked fear in the face and said, 'I just don't care.'?"

Thank you So much! Jeez, I put this up a year ago, this made my day :)

on May. 23 2014 at 7:07 am
WickedDreamer PLATINUM, Salem, Other
30 articles 0 photos 28 comments

Favorite Quote:
The legacy you leave is the one you live

This. Is. Awesome. Great job! :)

on Jul. 11 2013 at 4:40 pm
Padfoot507 PLATINUM, Omaha, Nebraska
23 articles 2 photos 138 comments

Favorite Quote:
“It does not do to dwell on dreams and forget to live.”
-Albus Dumbledore

"I'm just a little bit caught in the middle,
Life is a maze, and love is a ridde."
-Lenka

This is flawless. You are an incredible writer!! The creativity and the message you send is so real. Fantastic job, keep it up!! :)


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