Atumn

January 25, 2013
By TevyRae PLATINUM, Pittsfield, Pennsylvania
TevyRae PLATINUM, Pittsfield, Pennsylvania
24 articles 7 photos 80 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Here is a small fact: You are going to die." ~The Book Thief
"You have no stupidity inside of your adorable little self." ~Mikey Pasterik


When I look at you,
There's a combination of,
Love and tears and joy.
Of the torn, the unexplored.

When I look at you,
My feeling isn't real.
Isn't true
And isn't sure.

Is it something that I've done?
Or something that I haven't?
Is there something I can do?
Or something that I shouldn't?

When I look at you,
The tears they start so small,
I suppose we don't belong,
And the leaves begin to fall.

They fall down and,
No one helps them up.
Perhaps there's not enough,
Help
Me I can't breathe.
Locked in your smile,
Stay for a while.
Until this wind will pass.

When I look at you,
There's a combination of,
Love and tears and joy.
Of the torn, the unexplored.



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on Jul. 12 2014 at 1:16 pm
EmilytheBelleofA. DIAMOND, Athens, Georgia
81 articles 5 photos 1492 comments

Favorite Quote:
To love is to be vulnerable; Triumph is born out of struggle; We notice shadows most when they stand alone in the midst of overwhelming light.

Wonderful! I'm like one of your fans! ^_^ i'm like a fan of the many poets on this website, lol. thanks for sharing this!

on May. 6 2013 at 7:16 pm
PotterWhoLocked GOLD, Montclair, Virginia
13 articles 0 photos 28 comments

Favorite Quote:
“Wednesdays are limbo days. Monday is the beginning of the week, Tuesday is getting used to it, Thursday is looking forward to Friday and Friday is getting ready for the weekend. Wednesdays aren’t really anything in particular. They’re just there.”

The feelings and insecurities described in this poem are really well written. Well done.

Mckay ELITE said...
on Apr. 29 2013 at 4:09 pm
Mckay ELITE, Somewhere, Virginia
146 articles 0 photos 2260 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The people who are crazy enough to think they can change the world are the ones who do."
—Apple’s “Think Different” commercial, 1997
“Crazy people are considered mad by the rest of the society only because their intelligence isn't understood.”
― Weihui Zhou

God bless you too. thanks.

on Apr. 26 2013 at 9:20 pm
TevyRae PLATINUM, Pittsfield, Pennsylvania
24 articles 7 photos 80 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Here is a small fact: You are going to die." ~The Book Thief
"You have no stupidity inside of your adorable little self." ~Mikey Pasterik

firstly, thanks for commenting and sharing! Its so awesome to know that something I've worked on can leave such an inpression. Thank you so much:D  GodBless<3

Mckay ELITE said...
on Apr. 26 2013 at 4:42 pm
Mckay ELITE, Somewhere, Virginia
146 articles 0 photos 2260 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The people who are crazy enough to think they can change the world are the ones who do."
—Apple’s “Think Different” commercial, 1997
“Crazy people are considered mad by the rest of the society only because their intelligence isn't understood.”
― Weihui Zhou

I feel like as I read this, that you are talking about me, even though you aren't really. It personally speaks to all the confusing emotions running through me. It's so special when a poem can do that to you. 

on Apr. 24 2013 at 8:17 am
TevyRae PLATINUM, Pittsfield, Pennsylvania
24 articles 7 photos 80 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Here is a small fact: You are going to die." ~The Book Thief
"You have no stupidity inside of your adorable little self." ~Mikey Pasterik

Thanks for reading and giving feedback!! thank you so much!! GodBless:D

on Apr. 21 2013 at 10:17 am
ElisaTheDuck ELITE, Rigaud, Other
323 articles 5 photos 168 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Describe yourself in three words."
"Lazy."

This is so beautiful! Great job and keep up the good work!


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