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A part of me says,
"Believe in dreams,
If you've got faith."
Another part of me says,
"Stop believing in dreams,
They are just fairy tales."

A part of me says,
"Believe in dreams,
And you'll own the world."
Another part of me says,
"Stop this nonsense,
You're not the 'chosen one'."

I want to give up,
But I want to try,
I want to live,
But I want to die...

I want to show the world who I am,
But I want to hide myself in a shell,
I'm stuck in this war and I can't escape,
Please save me from myself...!!!

A part of me says,
"I don't need to try,
My tears will dry on their own."
Another part of me says,
"I'm standing here frozen,
But the life keeps going on."

A part of me says,
"Let me stay asleep,
If I am dreaming."
Another part of me says,
"Open your eyes,
It won't give you anything."

I want to smile,
But I want to cry,
I want to live,
But I want to die...

I want to show the world who I am,
But I want to hide myself in a shell,
I'm stuck in this war and I can't escape,
Please save me from myself...!!!

I don't know what to do?
I don't know what to believe?
The part that is hopeful?
Or the other part of me?

I'm stuck in this war,
Between both parts of me,
I want to run far away,
Someone please set me free,

I want to hide in dark,
But I want to stay in light,
I want to live,
But I want to die...

I want to show the world who I am,
But I want to hide myself in a shell,
I'm stuck in this war and I can't escape,
Please save me from myself...!!!
Please save me from myself...!!!
Please save me from myself...!!!



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suvaaryThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
today at 11:24 am:
Beautifully written:D
 
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AbeeraThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jan. 18 at 9:12 am:
wishing u all the best..May God bless u.ameen.
 
Zoya_KhanThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jan. 18 at 10:25 am :
Thank u :) :) :)
 
AbeeraThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jan. 19 at 8:23 pm :
mention not.keep smiling.may God kill your tensions.
 
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AbeeraThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jan. 18 at 9:10 am:
''Life has both failures and successes, ups and downs, pains and pleasures. Success is achieved at the price of failures and pains. Pleasures seem sweet only after pains! If we are leading on a smooth road, then surely the path is wrong. Stones are never thrown on a fruitless tree!''
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HamzawaseemThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jan. 6 at 12:00 pm:
A good poem with somewhat psychological theme. It is a female version of "Dr.Jekyll and Mr.Hyde". I read the previous comments on your other poems. Does not you family support your writing poems? (Just asking, don't mind please)
 
Zoya_KhanThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jan. 7 at 6:41 am :
No they don't support me.. They don't even know that I'm posting my poems online :(
 
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TeedyBelongstoBlackFoxThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jan. 6 at 10:34 am:
This very good well done A
 
Zoya_KhanThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jan. 6 at 10:38 am :
Thank u :) :) :)
 
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MonsterGirl2000 said...
Jan. 4 at 11:27 am:
long but i like it
 
Zoya_KhanThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jan. 4 at 12:23 pm :
Thanks :) :) :)
 
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