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I'm expressionless
Out of words
You took your turn
Now I'm helpless

Blank expression
Won't keep pretending
That you hurt me

I'm solid faced
Erased, was everything of mine
You replaced, our fate and told me all those lies
I won't forget your deeds
Of how you ruined me
I will stay, solid faced

Nothing left to get out
Nothing more to say
Feeling hurt, it could be worse

Blank expression
Won't keep pretending
That you hurt me!

I'm solid faced
Erased, was everything of mine
You replaced, our fate and told me all those lies
I won't forget your deeds
Of how you ruined me
I will stay, solid faced!

Solid faced...solid faced




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HazelGrace said...
Jun. 6 at 9:36 pm:
Okay I really like the idea and I get what you're trying to say.. but personally, I would change it to "stone-faced" you will be able to do more with it metaphorically (ie, no cracks will grace the visage that is my stone face) and it's just more poetic in general. But nice job overall :)
 
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Jun. 6 at 9:42 pm :
Thanks so much. And I like that "stone faced".!
 
HazelGrace replied...
yesterday at 10:21 am :
you are definitely welcome :)
 
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