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Fire Fever

September 19, 2012
By MustachioedPenguin BRONZE, Lilburn, Georgia
MustachioedPenguin BRONZE, Lilburn, Georgia
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It starts, with a spark
A shine in the dark hour
Sets off a chain, and I’m
A little scared of the power

The temperature rises
And I grow a little bit tired
I glisten like a diamond as the
The heat becomes higher

Fires grow brighter
Climb so much higher
All the fires
Never ever tired

The flames lick me
My burns begin to swell
Outside, I’m totally fine
But inside, not as well

I think that I’m
Catching a fever
From this devastating devilish heat
I think that I’m
Losing hope, ‘cause these
Fires seem impossible to beat



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on Oct. 4 2012 at 5:52 am
TanviKusum DIAMOND, Gurgaon, Other
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Favorite Quote:
All men who have achieved great things have been great dreamers.
Orison Swett Marden

"The role of a writer is not to say what we all can say, but what we are unable to say." - Anais Nin

we speak in hushed voices so as to not wake our memories

Loved it! :)

Ms. Thiers said...
on Sep. 28 2012 at 8:05 am
This is amazing! You are a wonderful and talented writer.  I am so impressed.  I would love to hear the song!  Great job!

on Sep. 21 2012 at 6:39 pm
PurpOreos SILVER, Macomb, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
Keep smiling...Because life is a beautiful thing. And there is so much to smile about!
"Either write something worth reading or do something worth writing" Benjamin Franklin

Nice! Like how it flows. Really cacthy. Keep writting!!

em_0112 BRONZE said...
on Sep. 21 2012 at 6:01 pm
em_0112 BRONZE, Bburg, New Jersey
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loved it penguin...was really good...when i post something i will tell u ...  

on Sep. 21 2012 at 5:58 pm
Shadowpomgurl PLATINUM, Canton, New York
22 articles 0 photos 126 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I was NEVER that drunk." -Johnny Depp as Jack Sparrow

okay, awesome awesome imagery and the meter is really precise! i love! gave it five stars! keep it up  

jazznickat said...
on Sep. 21 2012 at 4:33 pm
Nice work Anguth! :) -Jasmine

Julia said...
on Sep. 21 2012 at 3:00 pm
Love the deep feeling!

Taros_Lover said...
on Sep. 21 2012 at 10:31 am
Wow That's amazing. It's different but interesting. I think that this poem actually sounds better than something proffessional done.