Lose Control

June 6, 2012
By eddys96 SILVER, Sacramento, California
eddys96 SILVER, Sacramento, California
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Favorite Quote:
"Perfection is achieved, not when there is nothing more to add, but when there is nothing left to take away."
—Antoine de Saint-Exupéry

Don't Be Afraid if things seem difficult in the beginning. That's only initial impression.. The Important things is not the Retreat; You have to Master Yourself


You said you'd be there for me now
I always held it down
I get you mad
you make me sad
I can't have fun
I only sigh
but one day, I will have fun. I will shine I will
lose control.

I loose myself in the crowd,
you need to let it all out loud.
Lose yourself lose control
forget the past
and make it last
lose yourself
lose control.

you get me mad
I let it out
you leave me now
you said you wouldn't leave
I believed you then
but now I don't I need to cry
but I'll just let it out and lose control

I loose myself in the crowd
you need to let it all out loud.
Lose yourself lose control
forget the past
and make it last
lose yourself
lose control!

Baby you don't love me maybe you will love me
just bring it down and lose control
bring it down
what we had just died.



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Jayhawk said...
on Jun. 28 2013 at 1:36 pm
Love the emotionality expressed. This is vibrant. This is human.

jj77 said...
on Jun. 28 2013 at 11:11 am
I would love to hear this set to chords.  A hit in the making. 

on Jul. 12 2012 at 7:02 pm
bintyousuf BRONZE, Fairfax, Virginia
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I love this. I don't know if you wrote it that way, but I saw many themes in this. Wonderful!

on Jun. 8 2012 at 7:36 pm
Mantequilla SILVER, Eagan, Minnesota
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Coolio. This is really good. I like how you show how sometimes it's good for us to just let go and breathe. Good Job.

Robert93 said...
on Jun. 8 2012 at 6:55 pm
Wow this is amazing. So many memories from just reading this. I have read your articles and I have got to admit you're very talented when it comes to expressing yourself. Keep posting, I would love to read more!


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