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I can never understand you
One minute, you’re in love with me
The next you completely despise me
One minute, you think I’m funny
The next you’re complaining that I told the punch line wrong
One minute, we’re singing along to our song
The next you’re yelling for me to turn the radio off
I want to understand
What this is, cause
It’s not love
No this is not love
And I wish that I
Could read your mind, cause
Listening to your words is
Driving me blind
To the beauty that we could have
That we used to have
That I thought, we, had
I can never understand you




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iCheetoThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 19, 2012 at 9:33 pm:
Thanks so much for the super kind words and criticisms guys, it means a ton to know you liked my poem :D
 
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Purple158 said...
Jun. 16, 2012 at 2:23 pm:
Favorite lines are "And I wish that I could read your mind, cause Listening to your words is driving me blind" I really enjoeyd this peom. Keep writting! You got talent! (:
 
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DanielM said...
Jun. 15, 2012 at 10:20 pm:
This was a really good poem. I admired the back in forth questions. I could tell how without communcation realtionships can be tough. Great Message. Suggestion: maybe end with a hook next time
 
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NatureWriterThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
May 31, 2012 at 8:51 pm:
Wow, nice job. It really shows the truth and the confusion of a relationship that isn't that strong. 
 
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