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You'll Never Know

April 6, 2012
By NextGen GOLD, Hillsboro, Ohio
NextGen GOLD, Hillsboro, Ohio
17 articles 10 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Tragedy is when I cut my finger. Comedy is when you fall into an open sewer and die." - Mel Brooks


I know
We never could have worked
But sometimes I wish
I could see you again

Your warmth
Your touch
Of all the times I knew you
I need you now the most

[So why can't you see me
Why do I feel invisible
Tell me did you hate me
Am I not good enough

Roses on the floor
Maintained by my repetition
Flooded by all my tears
But you'll never know ]

Everything I told you
Everything about myself
You should know
Do my tears go unnoticed

Somehow
If you come back
I'm not sure I'll be happy
I might be gone by then

[]

You'll never see my roses
See your name written in red and white
Sometimes devotion is a sickness

And you can't see me
Lying here all alone
I feel so unloved by you
But soon the pain will all go away

Roses on the floor
Maintained by my repetition
Flooded by my tears
But you'll never know


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NextGen GOLD said...
on Apr. 11 2012 at 7:54 am
NextGen GOLD, Hillsboro, Ohio
17 articles 10 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Tragedy is when I cut my finger. Comedy is when you fall into an open sewer and die." - Mel Brooks

Thank you! And sure, I'll try, if I have time.

on Apr. 11 2012 at 7:51 am
RedFeather GOLD, Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania
12 articles 0 photos 155 comments

Favorite Quote:
Prose is like walking but poetry is like dancing.
—Paul Valery, poet (1871 - 1945)

Wow. You've managed to portray  feelings of love, loss, betrayal, and helplessness. It's a really strong and great poem. :)

If you have time, could you check out my song "Fly Away" and let me know what you think?