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i dont know... wat time will peel.....
till then.. my heart squeels..
and i am writing in this page,
the story of wat i feel......

Dont leave me...alone..alone.....alone......
i hv no one except you....
you were the only soul, i could connect to.....
i can't describe, wat hv been going through in my head......
i wish the memories rewind everyday....and live to make the solitude dead
this life is lonely.. i need someone...
and i need you....
the only soul, i could connect to.....
i know the world is cruel, but kind is our fate......
i never felt wat love was, now i think i have felt the taste......
it feels like heaven....... but the distance makes it hell.....
so the feeling inside my head, ....I cant tell...
it feels like heaven, but the situation makes it hell....
so the bleeding inside my heart hurts....
but the bleeding is i always needed..., something to cry for....,
the bleeding is an addiction....... for which this heart strives for....
but only when....., the blood drops....warm our love with heat.....
and the bleeding should stop......, and a day, should be a witness of our meet....
but i fear, that the wounds of seperation..... will never heal.....
so again the heaven turns into hell..... this is the story of wat i feel......



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Silver-winged said...
May 7, 2012 at 8:09 am:
WOW awsome poem, a lot of emotion
 
Tonedeff replied...
May 7, 2012 at 8:11 am :
Thanks....
 
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DrowningInTheBrooke said...
Apr. 29, 2012 at 1:27 am:
Wow...I like this a lot. Very good.. :) So...emotional.. :)
 
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CreativeJesusDisciple said...
Apr. 23, 2012 at 7:36 am:
Hey, I really like this. and I also love Poets of the Fall.... :) Have a great day.
 
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torilutz8 said...
Mar. 25, 2012 at 1:08 am:
Oh I definitely relate to this... well written. Good job :)
 
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