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This dream is beautiful......
but the wake is horrible....


We might never meet in our lives....,
We might never touch each other....,
but I know our souls have kissed each other
our hearts have understood each other.....
and that is what matters...
but when chances are nil..., even strong hopes shatter
I can never understand the strange event.... in my life....
i have so many liabilities to fulfill.... you may never be my wife
and that what hurts...., i wonder how could i live without you......
i wonder...., and i cry....... i wonder ...and i cry.........
i wonder and i cry.... , i wonder .and i cry.......
truth hurts....., but i still can't hide behind a lie.....
truth hurts, but still i can't hide behind a lie....
coz i'm in love... and love never lies....
and i'm in love.....
ohh.... this love never dies.......
I wonder if we will have to depart away, someday......
I wonder time stops right here. and wish the day never comes,
the day never comes,
the day never comes....
if it comes... i would rather prefer to go in a coma......
where only your thoughts create the aroma,
and the smell of your presence.... makes my heart beat forever...
until i die........,
until you face me.., i hope i never wake up.......,on that hospital bed i lie.....
on that hospital bed i lie......,
if possible....., i wish we could meet up someday..., with no obstacles in our way.....
only you and i alone......
the distances , killed when the mind
is filled with those sweet instances
and hand in hand, we travel the life's land
until we are buried under
as i said love never dies ...
so i wonder...,
whether our souls will fly
in heaven holding hands..
and will meet each other
till our next birth

This dream is beautiful......
but the wake is horrible....



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iCheeto This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 7, 2012 at 10:37 pm
This is awesome, I love it.  It displays great thought and care put in, and it flows just right.  Great job, it's really a lovely piece.
 
torilutz8 said...
Mar. 25, 2012 at 1:00 am
Wow this is really moving... and I love how you repeat the first two lines at the end. I like it :)
 
Black_Moon replied...
Mar. 25, 2012 at 1:02 am
Thanks a lot!!!!!
 
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