The Beautiful Coma

March 21, 2012
By Shivam GOLD, Lucknow, Other
Shivam GOLD, Lucknow, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Its nothing like nothing or all.. its just that how far you climb up the tree before you fall..


This dream is beautiful......
but the wake is horrible....


We might never meet in our lives....,
We might never touch each other....,
but I know our souls have kissed each other
our hearts have understood each other.....
and that is what matters...
but when chances are nil..., even strong hopes shatter
I can never understand the strange event.... in my life....
i have so many liabilities to fulfill.... you may never be my wife
and that what hurts...., i wonder how could i live without you......
i wonder...., and i cry....... i wonder ...and i cry.........
i wonder and i cry.... , i wonder .and i cry.......
truth hurts....., but i still can't hide behind a lie.....
truth hurts, but still i can't hide behind a lie....
coz i'm in love... and love never lies....
and i'm in love.....
ohh.... this love never dies.......
I wonder if we will have to depart away, someday......
I wonder time stops right here. and wish the day never comes,
the day never comes,
the day never comes....
if it comes... i would rather prefer to go in a coma......
where only your thoughts create the aroma,
and the smell of your presence.... makes my heart beat forever...
until i die........,
until you face me.., i hope i never wake up.......,on that hospital bed i lie.....
on that hospital bed i lie......,
if possible....., i wish we could meet up someday..., with no obstacles in our way.....
only you and i alone......
the distances , killed when the mind
is filled with those sweet instances
and hand in hand, we travel the life's land
until we are buried under
as i said love never dies ...
so i wonder...,
whether our souls will fly
in heaven holding hands..
and will meet each other
till our next birth

This dream is beautiful......
but the wake is horrible....



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on May. 7 2012 at 10:37 pm
iCheeto PLATINUM, Cape Coral, Florida
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This is awesome, I love it.  It displays great thought and care put in, and it flows just right.  Great job, it's really a lovely piece.

Shivam GOLD said...
on Mar. 25 2012 at 1:02 am
Shivam GOLD, Lucknow, Other
19 articles 0 photos 89 comments

Favorite Quote:
Its nothing like nothing or all.. its just that how far you climb up the tree before you fall..

Thanks a lot!!!!!

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on Mar. 25 2012 at 1:00 am
deleted, Miami, Florida
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Wow this is really moving... and I love how you repeat the first two lines at the end. I like it :)


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