Lockdown

Haven't seen my family in 68 days
they're right when they say crime doesn't pay
I don't even know what to say
because ever time i write
I cry and the longer I'm here I lose the light
my sight, it's getting fixed on freedom.
Can't help but wonder if my family will be happy when I see them.
I miss my father.
Does he realize I love him?





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Ahtyo said...
Jan. 17, 2012 at 7:14 pm
this is a great one. Good job.
 
yungnash95 replied...
Jan. 18, 2012 at 2:19 pm
Thank you :)
 
Amber4141610 said...
Jan. 15, 2012 at 5:36 pm
Beautiful. Really, that was amazing.
 
yungnash95 replied...
Jan. 18, 2012 at 2:19 pm
thank you for reading you should read my other writing :)
 
VballGirl143 said...
Jan. 14, 2012 at 1:42 pm
This is a great piece of writing.
 
yungnash95 replied...
Jan. 18, 2012 at 2:18 pm
thank you for reading, if you get time you should read my other writing,
 
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