If you love me then why do you keep leaving

We danced in each others arms
and it seemed just an hour later
we were fighting and everything seemed said in done
but we never saw the pain that we left
you told me that you were leaving
and I fell to my knees crying and wondering

If you love me then why do you keep leaving
how come I am never enough to make you stay for one more day
If you care for me then why do you make me feel this way
will you ever know how much your words hurt me

When will our war ever end
how many more blows am I going to have to dodge
will you ever realize that I am on the edge
The words we said have left scars on our hearts
you will never stop saying that you are leaving
and I will always fall on my knees crying and wondering

If you love me then why do you keep leaving
how come I am never enough to make you stay for one more day
If you care for me then why do you make me feel this way
will you ever know how much your words hurt me





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Nathaniel said...
Jan. 4, 2012 at 10:59 am
While obviously a decent read, I think this poem could be accented--perhaps even highlighted!--with some punctuation and perhaps a brief edit. But aside from superficial impressions, it was decent. Keep writing and such.
 
poetidea_myworld_22 replied...
Jan. 4, 2012 at 11:04 am
thx u i think?
 
AnjiliSladen said...
Jan. 4, 2012 at 10:59 am
I like it!
 
poetidea_myworld_22 replied...
Jan. 4, 2012 at 11:05 am
thx u so much:)
 
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