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Miss Me But Let Me Go

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Baby lullabies
Close your tired eyes
Every time you cry
I gaze down in pain
You can’t see me here
But I am here my dear
Watching you get by
One day at a time

I am all alone
Struggling on my own
Trying to remember
All the good times that we had
One day at a time
Someday I know I’ll be fine
And I know you would say
Miss me but let me go




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OriginalCarbonation said...
Dec. 10, 2011 at 10:24 pm:
The rhyme scheme is a little too simplistic for my taste, but it does organize itself very well and hold the piece together nicely within its outlines. I like the topic and thought you sought to explain an abstract concept very well. I wouldn't have minded another few lines to finish it off though. I feel as if it's a bit unfinished. I want to leave this on a positive note though, so: fantastic as always. I love your work. :)
 
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