Miss Me But Let Me Go

December 5, 2011
By sonnysulouff GOLD, Clarendon Hills, Illinois
sonnysulouff GOLD, Clarendon Hills, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
"Life isn't fair, it's just fairer than death is all." -The Princess Bride
"You smell like beef and cheese, not like Santa." -Elf
"Andy: You're like an angel with no wings!
April: So like a person." -Parks and Recreation


Baby lullabies
Close your tired eyes
Every time you cry
I gaze down in pain
You can’t see me here
But I am here my dear
Watching you get by
One day at a time

I am all alone
Struggling on my own
Trying to remember
All the good times that we had
One day at a time
Someday I know I’ll be fine
And I know you would say
Miss me but let me go



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on Dec. 10 2011 at 10:24 pm
OriginalCarbonation GOLD, Naperville, Illinois
11 articles 0 photos 106 comments

Favorite Quote:
dream as if you'll live forever
live as if you'll die tomorrow

The rhyme scheme is a little too simplistic for my taste, but it does organize itself very well and hold the piece together nicely within its outlines. I like the topic and thought you sought to explain an abstract concept very well. I wouldn't have minded another few lines to finish it off though. I feel as if it's a bit unfinished. I want to leave this on a positive note though, so: fantastic as always. I love your work. :)




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