Violets Are Blue.

November 19, 2011
By A_Fate_Unknown BRONZE, Enumclaw, Washington
A_Fate_Unknown BRONZE, Enumclaw, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
Those who make peacefull revolution impossible, Will make violent Revolution inevitable.


Black souls surround me.
Hearts bathed in sin.
Bodies left burning.
Eyes dead within.

Nightmares consume.
Shes bleeding in the womb.
Its tearing me apart again.

Memories are fading.
Sudden flashes.
My hearts so burnt im bleeding ashes.

Embers of this life dance before my eyes.
As i cremate these memories and watch the ashes rise.

Cant you see my eyes are bleeding?
Cant you hear my minds still screaming?

Hands cupped over my ears to stop the ringing.

Take this blade and twist it deeper into me.
The time has come to stop the beating of this heart.


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on Mar. 1 2012 at 9:24 am
SuNshiNe007 ELITE, Magee Ms., Mississippi
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Favorite Quote:
Never Give Up, And Know That God Will Always Love You!

your welcome A_Fate_Unknown;) lol..

Kipitama GOLD said...
on Feb. 25 2012 at 8:09 pm
Kipitama GOLD, Council Bluffs, Iowa
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Favorite Quote:
"An eye for an eye makes the whole world blind." (Bartoletti, Campbell)

Why thank you! haha :)

 


on Feb. 24 2012 at 8:51 pm
A_Fate_Unknown BRONZE, Enumclaw, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
Those who make peacefull revolution impossible, Will make violent Revolution inevitable.

yeah it does haha

Kipitama GOLD said...
on Feb. 20 2012 at 5:38 pm
Kipitama GOLD, Council Bluffs, Iowa
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Favorite Quote:
"An eye for an eye makes the whole world blind." (Bartoletti, Campbell)

Blind love, drives you straight to the edge, until it's too late to see that your falling...oohh, that sounds like a great start to a new song,....

on Feb. 16 2012 at 10:43 am
A_Fate_Unknown BRONZE, Enumclaw, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
Those who make peacefull revolution impossible, Will make violent Revolution inevitable.

yes, I call it love blindness. When you can think clearly again you don't understand why you did the things you did.lol. But thank you Sunshine!

on Feb. 16 2012 at 9:14 am
SuNshiNe007 ELITE, Magee Ms., Mississippi
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Favorite Quote:
Never Give Up, And Know That God Will Always Love You!

Im glad your ok now..and yes, Toran i do kind of agree with you..But hey A_Fate_Unknown, keep up the amazing work!

Kipitama GOLD said...
on Feb. 16 2012 at 8:56 am
Kipitama GOLD, Council Bluffs, Iowa
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Favorite Quote:
"An eye for an eye makes the whole world blind." (Bartoletti, Campbell)

Funny how that works out, huh? I know exactly what that's like.....except from a girl's point of veiw.....

on Feb. 14 2012 at 10:56 am
A_Fate_Unknown BRONZE, Enumclaw, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
Those who make peacefull revolution impossible, Will make violent Revolution inevitable.

Well yes...this s definatly my darkest piece. This was written at a very wierd time in my life. I actually ended up having her come to a show where I played this song, lol. We don't even talk now, itsokay though, I've come to realize I hated everything about her.

Kipitama GOLD said...
on Feb. 14 2012 at 9:00 am
Kipitama GOLD, Council Bluffs, Iowa
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Favorite Quote:
"An eye for an eye makes the whole world blind." (Bartoletti, Campbell)

I agree, it was quite dark. But to me there was a strange sense of grace. And, relationships do suck when the person just "stops loving you" just when things were getting better. Those relationships are hardest to move on from. Great job:)

on Feb. 10 2012 at 7:48 am
SuNshiNe007 ELITE, Magee Ms., Mississippi
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Favorite Quote:
Never Give Up, And Know That God Will Always Love You!

This is dark..Sorry she done you that away..This is a great poem though. Good description. But dont give up I know you'll find the right one; one day.

on Dec. 11 2011 at 9:00 pm
A_Fate_Unknown BRONZE, Enumclaw, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
Those who make peacefull revolution impossible, Will make violent Revolution inevitable.

I got the inspiration from another bad relationship. That point where your suppost to get married and she says she doesnt love you anymore tends to have one think dark thoughts.

on Dec. 8 2011 at 8:21 pm
RedFeather GOLD, Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
Prose is like walking but poetry is like dancing.
—Paul Valery, poet (1871 - 1945)

Sorry, I accidently clicked the button twice.

on Dec. 8 2011 at 8:19 pm
RedFeather GOLD, Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
Prose is like walking but poetry is like dancing.
—Paul Valery, poet (1871 - 1945)

This is a really dark and mysterious poem. It reminds me of a series of reaccuring dreams that I keep haveing, which makes it all the creepier to me. I gotta ask, where'd you get the inspiration for this poem? And how does the title fit into it? Btw, I can see that each line has a specific meaning and the poem's really great - one of my favs.

on Dec. 8 2011 at 8:15 pm
RedFeather GOLD, Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania
12 articles 0 photos 155 comments

Favorite Quote:
Prose is like walking but poetry is like dancing.
—Paul Valery, poet (1871 - 1945)

This is a really dark and mysterious poem that reminds me of a series of reaccuring dreams that I keep haveing which makes it all the creepier for me. When I clicked on it, I thought that it would be a love song or something. I gotta ask, where'd you get the inspiration for this? Btw, I can see that each line has a specific meaning, and the poem's really great.




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