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I'm missin' my man

October 1, 2011
By Two-ply SILVER, Black Mountain, North Carolina
Two-ply SILVER, Black Mountain, North Carolina
6 articles 0 photos 30 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Do one thing each day that scares you" -Eleanor Roosevelt


ooo..
Everywhere I look,
I always see your smile,
And when you're just an inch away,
baby, it feels like a mi-ile...

I'm missin' my man.

He's my knight in shinin' armor,
fightin' on his steed
maybe it is love I feel,
or maybe it's just gre-ed!

I'm missin' my man.

We'll be on a pirate ship,
and I will be his treasure,
we'll sail the seven seas..
and always be together!

I'm missin' my man.

And when he comes home...
I'll run back into his heart...
I'll ask whether he missed me,'
and why we were apa-art!

I'm missin my man.



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Two-ply SILVER said...
on Jan. 5 2012 at 5:40 pm
Two-ply SILVER, Black Mountain, North Carolina
6 articles 0 photos 30 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Do one thing each day that scares you" -Eleanor Roosevelt

Thanks so much! I will definitely check out your work. Keep writing!

on Dec. 24 2011 at 10:23 am
HappyEverAfter SILVER, Rhinelander, Wisconsin
7 articles 0 photos 16 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Whoever said anything was possible obviously never tried slammimg a revolving door." -unknown

I liked this poem! I thought the repetition worked really well in this case. Maybe read my poem "Hide and Seek"? Keep up the good work, I'd like to see you submit some more!