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Broken Locks

The dance she dances fills my eyes.
The song she sings infects my mind.
Inside her smile im hypnotized.
Powerless to stop the rising tide.

Now this is the part where the needle skips
. And the tears fall like a sink that drips.

Destiny is proving to be difficult to deny.
The one thing i want is absent from my life.

Theres something that im still missing.
Its not in the girls that ive been kissing.
Its in the way we see one another.
Its in the smiles we cast each other.

it will get better is what they say.
every hour, every day.

I know that this cant be real.
But time hasnt changed the way i feel.
in with the old and out with the new.
I dont think anybody feels the way i do.
About you.

It was about the time i gave up hope in.
A world thats so broken.
That i found reason To break these locks open.
To say these words that were best unspoken.

You'll never see.
What you've done to me.
and youll never know.
why ill never let you go.

lets enter the unknown.
Theres so much you should have known.

Ill show you the side of me.
That no one ever see's
The part of me that i keep.
hidden inside so deep.

i know that this cant be real.
But time hasnt changed the way i feel.
In with the old and out with the new.
I dont think anybody feels the way i do.
About you.



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SuNshiNe007This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Feb. 10, 2012 at 7:45 am:
Wow! I love this:) The wording you used is amazing! Great Job!!
 
ToranThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Feb. 14, 2012 at 9:05 am :
I love the last two stansas...or mini paragraph thingys :)
 
A_Fate_Unknown replied...
Feb. 14, 2012 at 10:50 am :
haha thank you guys, although this piece honestly just depresses me.
 
SuNshiNe007This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Feb. 16, 2012 at 9:17 am :
ha, your welcome...sorry didnt know it depresses you..glad we could get you to laugh though..we'll always be here for you..
 
SuNshiNe007This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Feb. 16, 2012 at 9:19 am :
Ha, glad we could get you to laugh..Didin't know it depressed you though..But, we'll always be here for you;)
 
A_Fate_Unknown replied...
Feb. 16, 2012 at 10:46 am :
Well thanks Sunshine that means alot.
 
ToranThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Feb. 17, 2012 at 7:13 am :
Yeah Sunshine is really awesome at being there for people, even through reading other's poems and stories. Thanks Sunshine!:)
 
SuNshiNe007This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Feb. 21, 2012 at 7:47 am :
Your welcome Yall!:) And yall are so sweet!
 
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