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the soul

September 27, 2011
By MrsensitiveE GOLD, Apple Valley, California
MrsensitiveE GOLD, Apple Valley, California
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when you look at me?
what do you see?
I am the color black
a soul is what lack
so the shadows find me
the lock to my heart
which has no key
when i am alone
such agony makes me moan

looking at me
what do you see
if only i could be free


The author's comments:
i am inspired by my heart

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on Dec. 26 2011 at 12:05 am
MrsensitiveE GOLD, Apple Valley, California
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you know you want a piece of this lol

on Dec. 26 2011 at 12:03 am
RaveFire PLATINUM, Vancouver, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
"Sometimes You Have To Give Up Your Life To Save It." ~some book that i don't remember the name of

"Live Life Like There's No Yesterday" ~ random billboard

"If No One Can Hurt You, Then Nobody Loves You" ` ~ Kerli?

thats what YOU think!! ;) LOL

on Dec. 26 2011 at 12:02 am
RaveFire PLATINUM, Vancouver, Washington
32 articles 1 photo 217 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Sometimes You Have To Give Up Your Life To Save It." ~some book that i don't remember the name of

"Live Life Like There's No Yesterday" ~ random billboard

"If No One Can Hurt You, Then Nobody Loves You" ` ~ Kerli?

thats what YOU think! ;)

on Dec. 25 2011 at 11:56 pm
MrsensitiveE GOLD, Apple Valley, California
11 articles 0 photos 40 comments
yup im really hot

on Dec. 25 2011 at 11:52 pm
RaveFire PLATINUM, Vancouver, Washington
32 articles 1 photo 217 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Sometimes You Have To Give Up Your Life To Save It." ~some book that i don't remember the name of

"Live Life Like There's No Yesterday" ~ random billboard

"If No One Can Hurt You, Then Nobody Loves You" ` ~ Kerli?

lol! like totally! ;) hahaha

Morbidity said...
on Dec. 25 2011 at 11:45 pm
Morbidity, Nowhere, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"Sometimes you have to give up your life to save it."

tell mew ur name

Morbidity said...
on Dec. 25 2011 at 11:44 pm
Morbidity, Nowhere, Other
0 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Sometimes you have to give up your life to save it."

lol. ur such a flirt *rollz eyez*

on Dec. 25 2011 at 11:32 pm
MrsensitiveE GOLD, Apple Valley, California
11 articles 0 photos 40 comments
so you dont have to know me

on Dec. 25 2011 at 11:28 pm
RaveFire PLATINUM, Vancouver, Washington
32 articles 1 photo 217 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Sometimes You Have To Give Up Your Life To Save It." ~some book that i don't remember the name of

"Live Life Like There's No Yesterday" ~ random billboard

"If No One Can Hurt You, Then Nobody Loves You" ` ~ Kerli?

um..your age? no. but you? i dont know you! lol

on Dec. 25 2011 at 11:09 pm
MrsensitiveE GOLD, Apple Valley, California
11 articles 0 photos 40 comments
17 am i too old for you lol

on Dec. 25 2011 at 9:34 pm
RaveFire PLATINUM, Vancouver, Washington
32 articles 1 photo 217 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Sometimes You Have To Give Up Your Life To Save It." ~some book that i don't remember the name of

"Live Life Like There's No Yesterday" ~ random billboard

"If No One Can Hurt You, Then Nobody Loves You" ` ~ Kerli?

14 u?.

on Dec. 24 2011 at 7:07 pm
MrsensitiveE GOLD, Apple Valley, California
11 articles 0 photos 40 comments
lol small how old r u

on Dec. 13 2011 at 5:25 pm
RaveFire PLATINUM, Vancouver, Washington
32 articles 1 photo 217 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Sometimes You Have To Give Up Your Life To Save It." ~some book that i don't remember the name of

"Live Life Like There's No Yesterday" ~ random billboard

"If No One Can Hurt You, Then Nobody Loves You" ` ~ Kerli?

um..ok? but just to let u know, its gonna be small no matter what

mrsensetive said...
on Dec. 13 2011 at 10:05 am
ill post a new one then lol 

on Dec. 12 2011 at 5:41 pm
RaveFire PLATINUM, Vancouver, Washington
32 articles 1 photo 217 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Sometimes You Have To Give Up Your Life To Save It." ~some book that i don't remember the name of

"Live Life Like There's No Yesterday" ~ random billboard

"If No One Can Hurt You, Then Nobody Loves You" ` ~ Kerli?

thats good that u plan on writing forever. as for how u look, its a random question and ur pic is crappy quality. so..sorry? but i cant tell

mrsensitive said...
on Dec. 12 2011 at 8:51 am
i plan to write forever and ever am i cute

on Dec. 9 2011 at 5:26 pm
RaveFire PLATINUM, Vancouver, Washington
32 articles 1 photo 217 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Sometimes You Have To Give Up Your Life To Save It." ~some book that i don't remember the name of

"Live Life Like There's No Yesterday" ~ random billboard

"If No One Can Hurt You, Then Nobody Loves You" ` ~ Kerli?

haha thx :) but seriously when you say "the lock to my heart has no key" i wanted to scream (in joy) because thats kinda been a topic on my mind lately. the key isnt lost, there just never was one to begin with. keep writing. id love to read more :)

mrsensitive said...
on Dec. 9 2011 at 8:57 am
and you are definitly a cutie

on Dec. 8 2011 at 5:30 pm
RaveFire PLATINUM, Vancouver, Washington
32 articles 1 photo 217 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Sometimes You Have To Give Up Your Life To Save It." ~some book that i don't remember the name of

"Live Life Like There's No Yesterday" ~ random billboard

"If No One Can Hurt You, Then Nobody Loves You" ` ~ Kerli?

huh? why not? u definetly are.

on Dec. 8 2011 at 3:51 pm
MrsensitiveE GOLD, Apple Valley, California
11 articles 0 photos 40 comments
hihihihihihihihihihihi