I wasn't looking for forever.

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I wasn't asking for forever in that first kiss.
Because forever doesn't exist.
I wasn't looking for love .. just a bliss.

What can I say I fell in love with you.
But i would never tell you,i just hoped one day you would to.
But i wasn't asking you to be my baby or my boo.
I just wanted lovin from you.

Because I wouldn't ask for something i couldn't give.
I wasn't asking for forever.
Because forever doesn't exist.

As tI'me went by I only wanted you by my side
But instead every night I lay in my bed to cry
for you i should despise
but in truth I'm so madly in love with you,if only it was a lie.





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Lexiana R. said...
Oct. 11, 2011 at 7:02 pm
very nice choice of words. i really enjoyed reading this :)
 
FangPoet replied...
Oct. 17, 2011 at 9:02 pm
Thank you so much,if you could give me Oppinion on my other  work I would be greatly appriciated.
 
Orange_Penguin This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Oct. 11, 2011 at 2:59 pm
I know exactly how you feel!! Great job!!
 
FangPoet replied...
Oct. 17, 2011 at 9:01 pm
Thank you so much,if you could give me Oppinion on my other  work I would be greatly appriciated.
 
TradeMistakes13 said...
Oct. 11, 2011 at 12:27 pm
this is good. i like the simple style of your writing... great job!
 
FangPoet replied...
Oct. 17, 2011 at 9:00 pm
Thank you so much,if you could give me Oppinion on my other I would be greatly appriciated.
 
AEMarcher2395 said...
Oct. 9, 2011 at 9:44 pm

I really like this! You did a great job with choice of words.. =] 5/5

Also if you wanna check out my page id greatly appreciate it =]

 
FangPoet replied...
Oct. 17, 2011 at 9:00 pm

Thank you so much,if you could give me Oppinion on my other I would be greatly appriciated.

And I did and rated your other poems.

 
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