NEVER. . .

August 17, 2011
You never learned to love,

you never learned to live.

I had to teach all of it to you.

But blew it all. . . away. . .

Never! Never again! shall you see me,

Running to your aid.

You brushed me off

and never looked back.

You never really saw me again.

I told you sooo.

Though never listened,

you never heard.

Me calling to you. . .

Never! Never again

shall you see calling for you!

You took me and pushed away,

and never helped me up.

You left me there,

On the cold bare path,

of despair. . .

Never! Never again!

shall you see me loving you!

Never! Never again!

shall you see me coming to you!

Never! Never again!

Shall you listen to ooh me. ..

Never. . .





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Gypsyrose7 said...
Sept. 9, 2011 at 8:40 pm
It's really good! i lke it. If you get a chance could you read my work, i just got the courgae to actually post something. Thanks :)
 
writerfreak21231This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Sept. 10, 2011 at 8:02 am
yeah i will! thanks for reading! :)(:
 
youngpilot said...
Aug. 27, 2011 at 9:12 am

nice:) question is did you put music to it?

 

 
youngpilot replied...
Aug. 27, 2011 at 9:14 am

grrrrrrrrrrrr. post!

writer usage only

nightstalker5

its in A. O. L

 
jellotinisjiggly24This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Aug. 27, 2011 at 9:18 am
thanks!and no i didnt post music to it :)(: thanks though!!! :)(:
 
mission250 said...
Aug. 19, 2011 at 11:13 pm

Nicely done! The words build off themselves really well.

This song illustrates how empty I believe human love really is. It's a common search: the search for a love that lasts.

Only thing about it, (this isn't a cirtique, just my thoughts): it makes me feel sad, how the words dead-end in dispair.

 
jellotinisjiggly24This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Aug. 20, 2011 at 8:54 am
yeah. I wanted this song to be deep! Thanks for reading it! And thanks for liking it!!! :)(:
 
writerfreak21231This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Aug. 18, 2011 at 4:42 pm
please comment and rate on this song! Thanks a bunch! and when I get a chance I will read your stories too! :)(:
 
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