NEVER. . .

August 17, 2011
By Free_One PLATINUM, ????, Ohio
Free_One PLATINUM, ????, Ohio
40 articles 1 photo 773 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I am not invincible or unstoppable, but I stay strong because it is the only way to survive in this world."


You never learned to love,

you never learned to live.

I had to teach all of it to you.

But blew it all. . . away. . .

Never! Never again! shall you see me,

Running to your aid.

You brushed me off

and never looked back.

You never really saw me again.

I told you sooo.

Though never listened,

you never heard.

Me calling to you. . .

Never! Never again

shall you see calling for you!

You took me and pushed away,

and never helped me up.

You left me there,

On the cold bare path,

of despair. . .

Never! Never again!

shall you see me loving you!

Never! Never again!

shall you see me coming to you!

Never! Never again!

Shall you listen to ooh me. ..

Never. . .



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on Sep. 10 2011 at 8:02 am
Free_One PLATINUM, ????, Ohio
40 articles 1 photo 773 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I am not invincible or unstoppable, but I stay strong because it is the only way to survive in this world."

yeah i will! thanks for reading! :)(:

on Sep. 9 2011 at 8:40 pm
Gypsyrose7 BRONZE, Binghamton, New York
2 articles 0 photos 12 comments
It's really good! i lke it. If you get a chance could you read my work, i just got the courgae to actually post something. Thanks :)

on Aug. 27 2011 at 9:18 am
Free_One PLATINUM, ????, Ohio
40 articles 1 photo 773 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I am not invincible or unstoppable, but I stay strong because it is the only way to survive in this world."

thanks!and no i didnt post music to it :)(: thanks though!!! :)(:

on Aug. 27 2011 at 9:14 am
DaughteroftheTrumpet BRONZE, East Aurora, New York
2 articles 2 photos 214 comments

Favorite Quote:
Washington Irving once said “There is sacredness in tears. They are not the mark of weakness, but of power. They are messengers of overwhelming grief and of unspeakable love.”

grrrrrrrrrrrr. post!

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on Aug. 27 2011 at 9:12 am
DaughteroftheTrumpet BRONZE, East Aurora, New York
2 articles 2 photos 214 comments

Favorite Quote:
Washington Irving once said “There is sacredness in tears. They are not the mark of weakness, but of power. They are messengers of overwhelming grief and of unspeakable love.”

nice:) question is did you put music to it?

 


on Aug. 20 2011 at 8:54 am
Free_One PLATINUM, ????, Ohio
40 articles 1 photo 773 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I am not invincible or unstoppable, but I stay strong because it is the only way to survive in this world."

yeah. I wanted this song to be deep! Thanks for reading it! And thanks for liking it!!! :)(:

mission250 said...
on Aug. 19 2011 at 11:13 pm

Nicely done! The words build off themselves really well.

This song illustrates how empty I believe human love really is. It's a common search: the search for a love that lasts.

Only thing about it, (this isn't a cirtique, just my thoughts): it makes me feel sad, how the words dead-end in dispair.


on Aug. 18 2011 at 4:42 pm
Free_One PLATINUM, ????, Ohio
40 articles 1 photo 773 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I am not invincible or unstoppable, but I stay strong because it is the only way to survive in this world."

please comment and rate on this song! Thanks a bunch! and when I get a chance I will read your stories too! :)(:


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