These Tears Are Shed For You

August 9, 2011
By Free_One PLATINUM, ????, Ohio
Free_One PLATINUM, ????, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"I am not invincible or unstoppable, but I stay strong because it is the only way to survive in this world."


I sit there crying,

On the porch step,

as you walk away from me.

These tears of mine

shed for you and only you.

they shed for you, oh oo oo oo.

and as they start to clear,

you whisper, in her ear.

These tears of mine

shed for and only you.

these tears of mine, oo oo oo.

You walk away,

hand and hand.

And say

never to come back again!

These tear shed for you,

and only you.

These tears of mine

are shed for and only you

oo oo.

Shed for you

and only you

Shed for you

and only

you. . .

oo oo oo. . .



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on Dec. 13 2011 at 2:37 pm
Free_One PLATINUM, ????, Ohio
40 articles 1 photo 773 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I am not invincible or unstoppable, but I stay strong because it is the only way to survive in this world."

thank you sooo much! and yes i really do like your writing! It has a great meaning to it! Great job and thanks again! :)(:

on Dec. 13 2011 at 8:02 am
Musicalartist, Xxxxx, Other
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i really like your writing! 

~Max <3


on Dec. 13 2011 at 8:01 am
Musicalartist, Xxxxx, Other
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i really liek your work, just as you like mine!

Keep writing and let me know!

~Max <3


on Aug. 20 2011 at 4:28 pm
Free_One PLATINUM, ????, Ohio
40 articles 1 photo 773 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I am not invincible or unstoppable, but I stay strong because it is the only way to survive in this world."

thank you sooo much! u made my day! :)(:

on Aug. 17 2011 at 4:49 pm
thetruthawaits94 SILVER, Duncan, Oklahoma
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Favorite Quote:
Life is not about waiting for the storm to pass, but learning to dance in the rain.

very cool. i like it a lot! i think if you could add some verses describing him, what the two of you were, who the other girl is, or something like that just to tell more of a story so that i would feel more connected to or have more feelings for the subject, you know? i think it would be more powerful that way. right now i feel like this is the refrain but not much else because it just repeats over and over. BUT this is really a great thought to build on and i encourage you to keep doing so! This is really good so far! :)

on Aug. 17 2011 at 4:08 pm
Free_One PLATINUM, ????, Ohio
40 articles 1 photo 773 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I am not invincible or unstoppable, but I stay strong because it is the only way to survive in this world."

Thank you sooo much!!!! :)(:

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on Aug. 17 2011 at 4:06 pm
Bambi67 SILVER, Chicago, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
remember that the future comes one day at a time.
Dean Acheson

favorite one! keep writing!

on Aug. 17 2011 at 4:05 pm
Free_One PLATINUM, ????, Ohio
40 articles 1 photo 773 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I am not invincible or unstoppable, but I stay strong because it is the only way to survive in this world."

my new user name is: actually now it is: jellotinisjiggly24

on Aug. 17 2011 at 3:23 pm
Free_One PLATINUM, ????, Ohio
40 articles 1 photo 773 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I am not invincible or unstoppable, but I stay strong because it is the only way to survive in this world."

please comment and rate. I enjoy readig and listening to it! Thanks a bunch! :)(:


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