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I Cant Wait

July 27, 2011
By LoudnProud BRONZE, Benton Ridge, Ohio
LoudnProud BRONZE, Benton Ridge, Ohio
3 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
"I am a common man, with common thoughts. Their are no monuments dedicated to me and my name will soon be forgotten, but I have loved another with all of my heart and for me that will always be enough." -Noah Calhoun from the movie/book The Notebook


I can't wait for the day
when I can walk down the street
and not look for you
I can't wait for the day
when I can sit at home
and not hope that you will call me

I can't wait for day
when I can look at you baby
and not feel a thing
I gave you my heart
such a big mistake
cuz' now I'm torn two
and I can't put
the pieces of my heart
back together if I don't
have all the pieces
So I can't wait

If this is just a dream
please wake me from my sleep
i don't wanna live
through that again
it's killin me now
to be sittin here
not sayin a word

I can't wait for day
when I can look at you baby
and not feel a thing
I gave you my heart
such a big mistake
cuz' now I'm torn two
and I can't put
the pieces of my heart
back together if I don't
have all the pieces
So I can't wait

Please don't tell me
that everything is lost
Everything that we had
it just can't be over
cuz for once
i felt like myself
but now I'm waiting ...

I can't wait for day
when I can look at you baby
and not feel a thing
I gave you my heart
such a big mistake
cuz' now I'm torn two
and I can't put
the pieces of my heart
back together if I don't
have all the pieces
So I can't wait

hey i can't wait
for goodbye


The author's comments:
I wrote this piece of music because of my ex-boyfriend. I saw this banner for face book and it said 'I can't wait for the day when I can look at you and feel absolutely nothing anymore', and all i could think of was him! So I wrote this because I started thinking of a whole bunch of things that i wished right after we broke up and I just couldn't Help but put them on on paper!

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on Aug. 20 2011 at 11:28 am
bound4life4ever PLATINUM, Jamaica, New York
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Favorite Quote:
Never take life seriously. Nobody gets out alive anyway.

I love this article! After u commeted on my poemni cheked our ur work nd i love it! I would DEFINATLY add this to my list of favorite poems if my compuor wasnt bein dumb! Keep writin! This really was a great poem with a fantastic ending

on Aug. 7 2011 at 7:38 pm
BriarRose PLATINUM, Seneca, Illinois
24 articles 7 photos 161 comments

Favorite Quote:
I don't need a rose. I want a daisy you picked for my hair. I don't want some fancy box of chocolate. I want a pink frosting cookie you made just for me. Lets skip the upscale restaraunt and have a picnic in the park.

This is really good. Um i think you forgot a word though.  Shoud "I can't wait for  day" be "I can't wait for [a/the] day"? 

 

My favorite part was "...I can't put/the pieces of my heart/back together if I don't/have all the pieces" So true, so true

 

Keep Writing =]

 

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