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Lover's Loss

July 26, 2011
By Sakura123 BRONZE, Oskaloosa, Kansas
Sakura123 BRONZE, Oskaloosa, Kansas
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Favorite Quote:
we are afraid of what makes us different.


It all starts with just one word,
the final deadly blow.
Everything falls apart,
the opposite of hello.

It tears up many lives,
and claiming so much more.
Yes, just that one word,
can make life not worth fighting for.

Lover's loss, and hearts demise.
The end of all those clear blue skies.
Torn apart and begging still,
wanting back their life's will.

Tears shall fall,
tempers flare.
The broken shards,
handled without care.

Some may be mended,
but many are not.
Almost all battles,
lost being fought.

Lover's loss and hearts demise,
The end of all those clear blue skies.
Torn apart and begging still,
trying to remain until...

Lover's loss and hearts demise.
The end of all those clear blue skies.
Torn apart and begging still,
wanting back their life's will.


The author's comments:
I was really bored one day, and I decided to pick up a pencil, then I came up with this.

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on Jul. 29 2011 at 6:53 pm
readaholic PLATINUM, Tomahawk, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
I'd rather fail because I fell on my own face than fall because someone tripped me up
~Jhonen Vasquez

There's a lot of emotion in this piece.  It's very good!