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Can Somebody Save Me?

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Of everything I gave up
Still feel like it’s not enough
Of everything I gave up
I’m left with no one to trust
Of everything I gave up
I feel like everything is burning to dust
Can somebody save me?
I’m living in a bubble
Can somebody save me?
Is it worth all this trouble?
Can somebody save me?
Make this strain go away
Suffering through it, day after day
Can somebody save me?
On my knees, to the Lord I pray
When I begin, I don’t even know what to say
When I pray, “Dear Lord,” I say
“Please can you make this pain ago away?
This stress is ridiculous, it’s pointless
And I’m sick of it.
For everything I stand for, been put through the ringer
But in return, all I got was the finger
And this pain won’t go away, it’ll just stay and linger
Oh please Lord, I can’t be that much of a sinner.”
Can somebody save me?
“but oh Lord, can’t you just end this game?
But you won’t, everything just stays the same
God, I’m on the brink of going insane
And it’s all because you wont take away my pain”










Of everything I gave up
Still feel like it’s not enough
Of everything I gave up
I’m left with no one to trust
Of everything I gave up
I feel like everything is burning to dust
Can somebody save me?
“Lord please save me, I’m hanging by a thread
My biggest enemy is my mind, as I’m slipping off the edge
As the problems grow bigger, the bigger the wedge
Dear Lord, did you hear what I just said?
No, you never answer, so now its time for bed”
Can somebody save me?
“No… Amen.”





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MiseryInDepth said...
Jul. 28, 2011 at 9:39 am
I loved this song! I could really feel where you were coming from, and I can relate to this song in many ways. Amazing job(:
 
Brianna L. replied...
Aug. 21, 2011 at 9:42 pm
Thank you so much. Sorry for the delay in response, i havent logged in for a while. I tried to express what i had to say in a way that it had a rythem. i don't know how well i succeeded lol but i tried. thanks again
 
readaholic said...
Jul. 26, 2011 at 8:06 am
This is very good!  I can really feel for you, and I hope you get through this.  Hang in there, whoever you are!
 
Brianna L. replied...
Jul. 26, 2011 at 11:52 am
thank you very much =)
 
readaholic replied...
Jul. 27, 2011 at 9:08 am
you're welcome! :) i'm surprised my comment posted.  I tried three times but ut never seemed to work.  If this exact same comment comes up two or three more times, DO NOT BE ALARMED ITS THE GHOST IN MY COMPUTER
 
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