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Take A Chance

July 19, 2011
By maggie.ramone BRONZE, Bubblegum World, Mississippi
maggie.ramone BRONZE, Bubblegum World, Mississippi
3 articles 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
" Don't carry life. Let life, carry you."
- Me


Why can't you see how much i love you?
Why can't you see all that I'd do
just to see you smile on that pretty face

I promise you won't be sad and lonely
You will no longer shed a tear
If you just put you trust right in me
I'll show you how amazing our love could be

Chorus:
Just say yes; take a chance on me
Just say yes; you'll be my one and only
I'll tell you you're beautiful everyday and night
And if you mess up i will make it right
I swear to be true and stay loyal to you
but first, take a chance on me

My heart stops beating when your coming close
When i hold you in my arms don't wanna let you go
Please take my hand and i won't let you fall
I promise to be there for you through it all

Chorus:
Just say yes; take a chance on me
Just say yes; you'll be my one and only
I'll tell you you're beautiful everyday and night
And if you mess up i will make it right
I swear to be true and stay loyal to you
but first, take a chance on me

I will call just to say 'i love you'
i will always tell you how much you're missed
i will erase all your fears and dry your tears
And i would do anything for just one kiss

Chorus:
Just say yes; take a chance one me
Just say yes; you'll be my one and only
I'll tell you you're beautiful everyday and night
And if you mess up i will make it right
I swear to be true and stay loyal to you
so please, pretty pretty please
take a chance on me


The author's comments:
hi guys ! this is my first song and i really hope you like it c:
rate, comment and don't be afraid to give me your honest opinion. Thank you so much !

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on Aug. 29 2011 at 6:11 pm
IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM, Lothlorien, Utah
44 articles 16 photos 2206 comments

Favorite Quote:
Boredom instigates extreme creativity.
~Amoniel

"Bowing gratefully to all of my subjects, 'thank you. Thank you. The pleasure is mine." Nah, I'm just kidding. We're all kings together.'"
~Thesilentraven

Good song, though it's pretty generic and I'm not getting the beat or the tune from how it was written. 

Shelby A. said...
on Aug. 8 2011 at 8:51 pm
Reading it now for the, maybe eighth time, I sort of get how it feels.

on Aug. 1 2011 at 8:50 pm
introducingshelby GOLD, San Diego, California
15 articles 1 photo 139 comments

Favorite Quote:
"People change so you can learn to let go, things go wrong so you can appreciate them when they go right, and things fall apart so better things can fall together."
-Marilyn Monroe

What a beaut :D But how many people actually know what this is about..[x