Summer Rain

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Golden grass
Cloudy sky
It's cold outside
but it's the middle of July
And I like the way
it looks today
'cause I hardly ever see
summer rain

Raindrops fall
on my face
I walk along
and let my heart just sing away
And I like the way
it looks today
'cause I hardly ever see
summer rain

And it's beautiful and quiet
The world seems fresh and new
And I'm enjoying every moment
knowing that the sun will come out shining soon

Scorching heat
usually burns my feet
it's hard to live
when it's 100 plus degrees
all the time
but right now my life
has summer rain
Summer rain
Summer rain
All around
Falls to the ground

Summer rain





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GreenSerenity said...
Dec. 30, 2011 at 10:56 pm
It has a very fresh feel to it. :) In my opinion, song writing is very difficult because you can't write lyrics without music and you can't write music without lyrics! Great job!
 
dia.dreamer said...
Aug. 14, 2011 at 1:14 am
perfect imagery! love it!
 
Hazel-daisy This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 23, 2011 at 6:51 pm
i like it, i can imagine really well too :)
 
gigi01 said...
Jul. 22, 2011 at 11:09 am
I really like this poem... It reminds me of something  I wrote, so it was very relatable to me... nice job... very refreshing! I'd appreciate if you would look at my poems, "Fireflies and Stars" and "Lord, You are my Comfort?"
 
moomoocow replied...
Jul. 22, 2011 at 3:33 pm
This is so good! Its really descriptive. I can see the rain you describing.
 
ams98 said...
Jul. 21, 2011 at 8:33 pm

i like the poem...it flows really nice. Its really pretty:) i like the part

"raindrops fall

on my face

i walk along

and let my heart sing away"

 
ohheyyyelli said...
Jul. 20, 2011 at 1:03 pm

This poem has a really nice flow to it. I also especially like the end "Summer rain

Summer rain

All around

Falls to the ground

Summer rain"

 
redhairCat This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jul. 20, 2011 at 1:45 pm
thanks so much!
 
RFrocker23 said...
Jul. 18, 2011 at 5:47 pm
I like the rhythm of this poem. Some parts of it were kind of strange but overall it was good. I love the sense of touch you incoroporated.
 
redhairCat This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jul. 20, 2011 at 1:45 pm
Strange? how so?
 
samiasaskia24 said...
Jul. 14, 2011 at 4:01 pm
Here I am commenting on your work. i really like this. I have a hard time writing poetry in ryme, to read this was very nice. i almost got the feeling of the rain falling on my face.
 
NinjaGirl This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 14, 2011 at 3:39 pm
I really like this. I'm a fan of summer rain because even though it can be depressing, it also provides an excuse to stay in and work on my writing! :)
 
BrightBurningCampeador This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 13, 2011 at 8:07 pm
I too love summer rain, but I have to repeat what I said about the chess song. Be careful with the music. Other than that, though, all I can really say is great job!
 
Delictious said...
Jul. 13, 2011 at 5:23 pm
I really like the repetition of summer rain throughout the entire piece! And I like that it's short and simple, not all wordy!(:
 
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