The Sunny Day

June 29, 2011
By , Sebastian, FL
Hey hey hey stop shinning your ray,
shine shine shine on the hay,
all all all all day,
theres one thing to say!,
Its not a nice way...
to treat me,
it hot please forgive me
for what did that made you hate me!,
so just please please stop shining those rays at me!





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thetruthawaits94 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 6, 2011 at 12:13 pm
it's 115 degrees where i am right now. So i completely am feeling this right now! lol. this fun. I like it. shining should be spelled like this. It sounds like a kid's sing-a-long song! :)
 
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