Not a Day Goes By

June 12, 2011
By Nissa-Marie BRONZE, Kettle Falls, Washington
Nissa-Marie BRONZE, Kettle Falls, Washington
4 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life's a race to see who can get to finish line last"
"Enjoy life... No one gets out alive."


All these years I never knew
I never knew what I was gonna do
If i lost you
But now you're gone
I'm barely holdin' on
What am I to do
Cuz
Not a day goes by
That I don't feel your touch
And not a day goes by
That i can't see you face
Not a day goes by
That I'm not asking myself
Where are you now?
And are you thinking of me?
Why is it that
I Can't get you out of my mind?
Even after all this time
You have this hold on me
And i can't break free
And now you've got me questioning
Why
Not a day goes by
That I don't feel your touch
And not a day goes by
That i can't see your face
Not a day goes by
That I'm not asking myself
Where are you now?
And are you thinking of me?
Somebody help
From these chains that bind me
You can't keep doin' this to me
Cuz
Not a day goes by
That I don't feel your touch
And not a day goes by
That I can't see your face
Not a day goes by
That I'm not asking myself
Where are you now?
And are you thinking of me?
Not a day goes by
That I don't feel your touch
And not a day goes by
That I can't see your face
Not a day goes by
That I'm not asking myself
Where are you now?
And are you thinking of me?


The author's comments:
It's really hard to just forgive and forget when you have been with someone for a long time. I wrote this thinking of everyone out there who's gone through that process

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on Aug. 25 2011 at 11:53 am
Nissa-Marie BRONZE, Kettle Falls, Washington
4 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life's a race to see who can get to finish line last"
"Enjoy life... No one gets out alive."

Thank you guys for your feed back... I really appreciate it :)

on Jul. 2 2011 at 7:19 pm
tarynpie BRONZE, Scottsdale, Arizona
2 articles 1 photo 28 comments
These words and phrases have been used so many times before so it isn't extremely original. However, I like the message and you put it together in a way where it is easy to relate to.

on Jul. 2 2011 at 6:02 pm
KatPantle SILVER, Burien, Washington
5 articles 4 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
"people dont change, the real them just comes out later in the relationship" -Carlos A.
"You said you like me better on my knees,
so I'll stick around.
Just so you can see me trying on my feet" -Carlos A.

ive had to go through that process, and am impressed by anyone who can put this into words. Bravo :)

on Jul. 2 2011 at 4:39 pm
Apennine BRONZE, Greenville, South Carolina
4 articles 0 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
\"Knowledge is power. Power corrupts. So study hard and be evil.\"

I love this poem!!!! (:

on Jul. 2 2011 at 4:38 pm
Apennine BRONZE, Greenville, South Carolina
4 articles 0 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
\"Knowledge is power. Power corrupts. So study hard and be evil.\"

repeating stanza is a chorus (I think)

 


A_Journey GOLD said...
on Jul. 2 2011 at 4:10 pm
A_Journey GOLD, Tampa, Florida
16 articles 2 photos 62 comments

Favorite Quote:
The Muse of Poetry should not know that roses in manure grow. ~The Formula, Langston Hughes
You may write me down in history with your bitter, twisted ties. You may trod me in the very dirt, but still, like dirt, I rise. ~Still I Rise, Maya Angelou

I really liked this poem! And i love the repeating stanza(idk what its called)! but did u spell cause wrong on purpose? just wondering. Can you check out some of my work? Thanks!


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