UNTITLED

April 22, 2011
By BrokenThorn BRONZE, Blenheim, Other
BrokenThorn BRONZE, Blenheim, Other
3 articles 0 photos 28 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You've lived your life Like a candle in the wind. Not knowing who to cling to when the rain set in"
- Sir Elton John


I never really knew you
You were just another friend
But when I got to know you
I let my heart be bent
When she came along
And took your breath away
I was truly devastated
I didn't know what to say


(pre chorus)

I spent my nights crying
Time after time
I spent my days lying
Saying that i was fine


(Chorus)

I'm not sure if you know or not
But i really do love you alot
You still hold a special place in my heart
Like I always knew you could


And if you wonder why
I still don't know what I'll say
Cause I'll never stop loving you
Each and every day
Little did you know
My heart was crushed inside
And on that lonely day
A little of me died


(Pre Chorus)

(Chorus x2)



With her you look so in love
Cause she's an angel from above
I have to teach my heart to move on
For you are now forever gone(x2)

I'm not sure if you know or not
But i really do love you alot
You still hold a special place in my heart
Like I always knew you could
I'm not sure if you know or not
But i really do love you alot
You still hold a special place in my heart
Like I always knew you...

The author's comments:
I always enjoyed song writing although I always found it hard to turn a few lines of lyrics into a song that flowed. I had a good friend help me make this into what you see here and it is actually a song with a tune right now. its the first song I have put music to.

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on May. 24 2012 at 3:24 am
BrokenThorn BRONZE, Blenheim, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"You've lived your life Like a candle in the wind. Not knowing who to cling to when the rain set in"
- Sir Elton John

Im glad you can, Its something unfortunatley alot of people, no matter, what age, go through in relationships x
Thank you for your comment :)

on Nov. 11 2011 at 7:52 am
selahoverrated GOLD, Mt Sidney, Virginia
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i can totally relate

on Oct. 5 2011 at 7:03 pm
BrokenThorn BRONZE, Blenheim, Other
3 articles 0 photos 28 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You've lived your life Like a candle in the wind. Not knowing who to cling to when the rain set in"
- Sir Elton John

100 views! Come on people COMMENT PLEASE

on Sep. 23 2011 at 10:08 pm
BrokenThorn BRONZE, Blenheim, Other
3 articles 0 photos 28 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You've lived your life Like a candle in the wind. Not knowing who to cling to when the rain set in"
- Sir Elton John

My friend who put a tune to in on the guitair moved away so that is still my plan, but its a work in progress to get it online

Thandiwe GOLD said...
on Sep. 15 2011 at 2:25 pm
Thandiwe GOLD, New York, New York
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Favorite Quote:
Just Write It. (follow me on tumblr: thandielove13.tumblr.com)

ooohhhhh. did u put in on youtube?

on Sep. 14 2011 at 8:10 pm
BrokenThorn BRONZE, Blenheim, Other
3 articles 0 photos 28 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You've lived your life Like a candle in the wind. Not knowing who to cling to when the rain set in"
- Sir Elton John

Read the blurb I wrote about this song, It is an actual swong with a tune and everything lol

Thandiwe GOLD said...
on Sep. 7 2011 at 12:40 pm
Thandiwe GOLD, New York, New York
13 articles 0 photos 65 comments

Favorite Quote:
Just Write It. (follow me on tumblr: thandielove13.tumblr.com)

Omg this should be a soooonnnn. i heart this. good job. maybe u should think about adding music to this :)


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