Burn My Heart MAG

March 10, 2011
By NathanLabiano SILVER, Enfield, Connecticut
NathanLabiano SILVER, Enfield, Connecticut
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Burn! Like a thousand flames.
Burn! Hear me scream your name
Burn! Like my heart tonight.
And I actually thought I might
be in love

Burn! You alone made my heart sing
You were my everything.
But no more, no more love, no hate
Leave behind the past.
No more pain, no more tears,
like a burning photograph,
Burn!


The author's comments:
What I felt after a bad break-up

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on Dec. 9 2014 at 3:13 pm
Sarelle PLATINUM, Winslow, Maine
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Favorite Quote:
Dream like you will live forever,
Live like you will die tomorrow.

I think you did an amazing job with the lyrics! You should write more to this song to make it longer, though. If you did, I would love to read it!

jesslyns3 said...
on Nov. 1 2012 at 9:59 am
jesslyns3, Plaquemine, Louisiana
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I like the line 'Burn! Like my heart tonight. And I actually thought I might be in love' because after a bad break up this is how i felt. I thought I was in love, but turns out, it wasn't meant to be.

Yuani16 said...
on Oct. 8 2012 at 9:11 am
I loved your lyrics. You used a good choice of words to express how you felt about a break up. I would have loved for it to be a full song though:(


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