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I see the tears
They fall down like pouring rain
I see the pain
It cuts so deep-like a stab to the heart
Your arms are wrapped around me
A beautiful perfect embrace
Could this be goodbye?
Were all of these feelings a lie?

I've seen perfection in your eyes
The way things were meant to be
This has been a roller coaster of emotions
There's been sweet memories made
I don't want to see what we have snatched away
Please, baby- give us one more chance.

Honey, come here
Let me wipe away all of the tears
I share your pain- I'll cry with you
Hold my hand, see the perfect way we interlace
We were meant for each other
Baby, don't throw it all away
Do you see the way I look at you?
Don't you know my love is true?

I've seen a glimpse of the sweet life with you
The way things were meant to be
My emotions have been scattered all over the place
But there's been beautiful memories made
Don't let what we have be snatched away
Please, baby- give us one more chance

Don't you see what we have?
Isn't it worth saving?
Something to fight for?
Please, try
Give it one more shot
Please!

I've seen perfection in your eyes
The way things were meant to be
This has been a roller coaster of emotions
There's been sweet memories made
I don't want to see what we have snatched away
Please, baby- give us one more chance.

I've seen a glimpse of the sweet life with you
The way things were meant to be
My emotions have been scattered all over the place
But there's been beautiful memories made
Don't let what we have be snatched away
Please, baby- give us one more chance

I've seen perfection in your eyes
The way things were meant to be
This has been a roller coaster of emotions
There's been sweet memories made
I don't want to see what we have snatched away
Please, baby- give us one more chance.



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lilmartz This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 29, 2011 at 9:05 pm
This is pretty good. Not going to lie, it's a little cliche, but sometimes, that's the way life works out. There was nothing in this I would change, honestly. Since there is so much repetition maybe another verse would be nice to add, but it isn't necessary, especially since a lot of songs are structured the same way yours is. Wow, well that's all the critique I have, so this must have been good. Nice work :)
 
love2love17 replied...
Mar. 30, 2011 at 5:49 pm
Thanks :) I know it's a little cliche, but then again I got the idea for it when watching tv... hahaha
 
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