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Can't stop myself

February 24, 2011
By Camii GOLD, Miami, Florida
Camii GOLD, Miami, Florida
10 articles 0 photos 75 comments

The first time I saw you
walking into the room
I felt something like
love at first sight
I wasn't sure what was it
I thought it'd go away
but it grew stronger
and stronger every day

And now I can't stop feeling
what I felt from the first moment
I met you
I can't help myself
This feeling I've never felt before
just won't go away
I carry it in my heart
wherever I go
and now I can't stop myself.

It goes on
It doesn't stop
The days pass by
I keep missing your smile
I feel so lost
and confused
but I know
that what I want is you

And now I can't stop feeling
what I felt from the first moment
I met you
I can't help myself
This feeling I've never felt before
just won't go away
I carry it in my heart
wherever I go
and now I can't stop myself.


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on Feb. 7 2012 at 9:27 pm
EthanCalhoun PLATINUM, Fairview, New Jersey
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great poem , i know how yu feel :)

Camii GOLD said...
on Jun. 1 2011 at 6:29 pm
Camii GOLD, Miami, Florida
10 articles 0 photos 75 comments
thank you!! :D

Camii GOLD said...
on Jun. 1 2011 at 6:29 pm
Camii GOLD, Miami, Florida
10 articles 0 photos 75 comments
thanks!!:)         

SamiLou SILVER said...
on Jun. 1 2011 at 6:26 pm
SamiLou SILVER, Lee&#39s Summit, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
"Imagining the future is a kind of nostalgia"
-John Green (Looking For Alaska)

I feel like this is like coming out of my heart, it just flows so beautifully

on Apr. 1 2011 at 8:52 pm
TanGem PLATINUM, Colorado Springs, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
Love is not a feeling; it is a gift, an act, an ultimate sacrifice. -Me (Em)

This writes like a fairytale. I honestly don't agree with the message that we are not able to control ourselves when we're in love. I think good love is always controlled and careful love, because only that can last forever.

But overall, excellent work.


Camii GOLD said...
on Mar. 25 2011 at 4:17 pm
Camii GOLD, Miami, Florida
10 articles 0 photos 75 comments
thank youu :D

Camii GOLD said...
on Mar. 25 2011 at 4:16 pm
Camii GOLD, Miami, Florida
10 articles 0 photos 75 comments
thanks                                        

Camii GOLD said...
on Mar. 25 2011 at 4:16 pm
Camii GOLD, Miami, Florida
10 articles 0 photos 75 comments
i'm glad you liked it!(:

Camii GOLD said...
on Mar. 25 2011 at 4:14 pm
Camii GOLD, Miami, Florida
10 articles 0 photos 75 comments
thank youu !!! :)

Camii GOLD said...
on Mar. 25 2011 at 4:12 pm
Camii GOLD, Miami, Florida
10 articles 0 photos 75 comments
thanks so much for your comment :D

Camii GOLD said...
on Mar. 25 2011 at 4:12 pm
Camii GOLD, Miami, Florida
10 articles 0 photos 75 comments
thanks!                    

on Mar. 21 2011 at 11:45 am
THE.REBEL.REBORN PLATINUM, Prentiss, Mississippi
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wow that is sensational

jclsjb SILVER said...
on Mar. 19 2011 at 10:29 pm
jclsjb SILVER, Paterson, New Jersey
9 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
" Being normal is overrated."

WOW! I can't pick out any part that was better than the next! This was such an awesome write!

on Mar. 18 2011 at 9:07 pm
HaleyDRog. GOLD, Easley, South Carolina
11 articles 14 photos 291 comments

Favorite Quote:
In three words I can sum up everything I've learned about life. It goes on. -Robert Frost

This is such a great piece. A lot of people can relate to it and it really is good!

on Mar. 13 2011 at 4:00 pm
_butters_ SILVER, Trinidad, Colorado
6 articles 18 photos 27 comments

Favorite Quote:
Your life is an occassion, rise to it.
~Mr. Edward Magorium

awe I really like this one. It's a song right? I'd love to hear the melody for this one too!!! jeezers it's not fair that you can't hear the song *pouts*

 

anyway. I love it. Keep at it, you've got tallent girl.


on Mar. 13 2011 at 2:34 pm
Cammie45874 SILVER, Ohio City, Ohio
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its very relatable

on Mar. 13 2011 at 12:28 pm
lilmartz PLATINUM, Perrysburg, Ohio
40 articles 5 photos 163 comments

Favorite Quote:
Live Life Like A Party That Never Ends

Typical, but cute. I liked the lines, "I felt something like love at first sight I wasn't sure what was it I thought it'd go away." That part was really true. Nice work :)