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Feelings of darkness sourround me.
And that is all that I will see.
All of the choices that I make.
Are they really me or just fake.
They path that I'm with
is all nothing but a myth.
But soon that will all change.
Because my live will now rearrange!

Soon my time will come true.
I will be who I thought I knew.
But that is all hard to do.
Yet I will proceed.
That is a choice I made indeed.
A simple decision is all I need.

All the years that had past.
I don't know if they will last.
All the people that were good.
And the simple little neighborhood.
Was it all that had seemed.
Or was it all that I dreamed?
But soon that will all change.
Because my live will now rearrange!

Soon my time will come true.
I will be who I thought I knew.
But that is all hard to do.
Yet I will proceed.
That is a choice I made indeed.
A simple decision is all I need.





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AlyBug said...
Jun. 8, 2011 at 1:16 pm
beautiful :)
 
TheSweetNerd said...
Apr. 12, 2011 at 7:53 am
This is like a twisted paradox, its that good. It reminds me of sumthin EAP wrote in A Dream Within A Dream, you have great flow and ryhme and you seem almost ambitious with your feelings.
 
super_nerd This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 7, 2011 at 5:18 pm
I really love the ideas behind this. The whole reality vs. appearance and decision vs. fate. You sound like a Greek philosopher. Best lines are "That is a choice I made indeed. A simple decision is all I need." I like that you put that more than once. But...forgive me, it's "life" instead of "live." lol well done!
 
radio_song said...
Apr. 1, 2011 at 9:13 pm
aww, this is really encouraging n true. its Great, Awesome work!!
 
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