Simple decision

December 22, 2010
By ossiecastro5 PLATINUM, A Single Light In, New Jersey
ossiecastro5 PLATINUM, A Single Light In, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
I'm not saying anything, I'm just saying.


Feelings of darkness sourround me.
And that is all that I will see.
All of the choices that I make.
Are they really me or just fake.
They path that I'm with
is all nothing but a myth.
But soon that will all change.
Because my live will now rearrange!

Soon my time will come true.
I will be who I thought I knew.
But that is all hard to do.
Yet I will proceed.
That is a choice I made indeed.
A simple decision is all I need.

All the years that had past.
I don't know if they will last.
All the people that were good.
And the simple little neighborhood.
Was it all that had seemed.
Or was it all that I dreamed?
But soon that will all change.
Because my live will now rearrange!

Soon my time will come true.
I will be who I thought I knew.
But that is all hard to do.
Yet I will proceed.
That is a choice I made indeed.
A simple decision is all I need.



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mememelo said...
on Jun. 8 2011 at 1:16 pm
mememelo, Lamar, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
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beautiful :)

JuStMe.DeZZi said...
on Apr. 12 2011 at 7:53 am
JuStMe.DeZZi, NA, Other
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This is like a twisted paradox, its that good. It reminds me of sumthin EAP wrote in A Dream Within A Dream, you have great flow and ryhme and you seem almost ambitious with your feelings.

on Apr. 7 2011 at 5:18 pm
the_sparrow SILVER, Chicago, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
"Be who you are and say what you feel, because those who mind don't matter, and those who matter don't mind." -Dr. Seuss

I really love the ideas behind this. The whole reality vs. appearance and decision vs. fate. You sound like a Greek philosopher. Best lines are "That is a choice I made indeed. A simple decision is all I need." I like that you put that more than once. But...forgive me, it's "life" instead of "live." lol well done!

on Apr. 1 2011 at 9:13 pm
HeatherBee BRONZE, I Live In, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Go on and try to tear me down. I will be rising from the ground, like a skyscraper

Love is louder than the pressure to be perfect

aww, this is really encouraging n true. its Great, Awesome work!!


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