A Dying Comforter's Song: Your First Hello

December 9, 2010
By ravenwing92 DIAMOND, Eastlake, Ohio
ravenwing92 DIAMOND, Eastlake, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
Way too many. I have a quotebook on facebook in my notes. It contains quotes from the Bible, myself, and others. ^_^


Verse 1:

Oh, my dear
Do not cry
This is not goodbye
Do not shed a tear

I will not be
Gone for too long
My dear, hear this song
Listen to me


Refrain:

Though we may be part
For a little while, dear
I always will be in your heart
Do you hear?

We will be together in the cloud
A Heaven, a place, a time
With no more goodbyes or crying loud
Just love’s poetic rhyme


Verse 2:

Do not blame God
It is my time to go
Keep with the Spirit and sow
Do not cry and sod

Be comforted, my dear
I’ll be in a better place
Where pain has no trace
Oh, my dear, do not shed a tear

(back to Refrain)

Bridge:

Oh, my dear!
Why such tear?
This is not a final goodbye
Do not be sad and sigh

We will meet again in the cloud, love
With perfect love’s poetic dove
Do not cry, love
This is not goodbye, dearest dove

(back to Refrain)

Ending:

Though I die…
This is not goodbye….
I love you so….
And in Heaven, I’ll be your first……..hello


The author's comments:
This is a slow song about a dying lover comforting his/her partner. It also can be taken in a view of a dying parent comforting his/her child. However, the lover situation works better I think. :D And it is my first time writing song lyrics. Any feedback would help. ^-^ Blessed be. :D

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