With Him

November 8, 2010
By alanacarlene DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
alanacarlene DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
55 articles 15 photos 592 comments

Favorite Quote:
Silence screams too honestly and loudly.
-Alex (aka GangstaEyes)
Freedom is the freedom to say that two plus two equals four.
-Winston Smith '1984'
Don't go wishin' your life away...
-Daddy S2
"What a drag it was to be limited by reality."


Verse 1:
Did you ever watch the shadows creep up the wilderness?
Did you ever see nature in her true beauty bliss?
And did you ever see the sun set before your very eyes,
Or see the lightning strike up that great fiery pride?

Chorus:
The green and blue and gold around you,
Shedding light and life surround you,
And all the beauty, and all the miracles
Show that He is watching out there somewhere.
And all the beauty and all the miracles you see…I truly God’s work at its best.

Verse 2
Did you hear the cicadas shrieking their songs at twilight?
And can you hear the winds and wolves howl into the empty night?
Or have you heard the stars twinkling their love song in the sky,
And have you let your ears dance to the mysterious face in the night?

Chorus:
The stars and moon and night surround you,
Shedding light and mysterious night surround you,
And all the mystery and all the miracles
Show that He is listening out there somewhere.
And all the mystery and all the miracles your hear,
Is truly God’s work at its best.


Verse 3:
Did you ever taste the sweetness or fantasy in you nighttime wish?
Or have you ever tasted his love mixed within his every kiss?
Have you ever tasted love drifting through the air?
And if you haven’t, one day we’ll all taste the love so fair.

Chorus:
The ever-lasting love surrounds you,
Shedding smiles and laughs around you,
And all the beauty and miracles show you
That He is listening out there somewhere,
And all the beauty and miracles you taste…
It’s truly God’s work at its best.

Verse 4:
Can you feel the wind’s arms wrap around you?
Just like your true love’s warm arms do?
And have you ever felt the warmth of his brown eyes,
When they stare at you and nothing’s what they hide?

Chorus:
His ever-lasting love surrounds you,
Holds you, loves you, and sheds light around you.
And all the beauty and all the miracles,
And all His love shows that He is watching,
And all His warmth shows that He is listening.
Way out there, oh somewhere,
Because all the beauty and miracles you feel,
Is truly God’s work and its best…
Yeah it’s truly God’s work at its beeee-est.


The author's comments:
I started this when I was outside as the sun was setting and I watched the shadows slowly devour the woods on the other side of the pasture. It was beautiful-truly God's work at its best :) hope you enjoy.

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on Nov. 26 2010 at 10:16 pm
alanacarlene DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
55 articles 15 photos 592 comments

Favorite Quote:
Silence screams too honestly and loudly.
-Alex (aka GangstaEyes)
Freedom is the freedom to say that two plus two equals four.
-Winston Smith '1984'
Don't go wishin' your life away...
-Daddy S2
"What a drag it was to be limited by reality."

Thank you so much :) and yeah I did! :D

on Nov. 26 2010 at 9:19 am
kebruiser BRONZE, Festus, Missouri
1 article 0 photos 3 comments
This is an amazing song and looks like you put a lot of hard work in to it it's awesome keep it up!

on Nov. 25 2010 at 3:33 pm
Skullcuffz SILVER, Waupaca, Wisconsin
6 articles 6 photos 32 comments

Favorite Quote:
Deep into that darkness peering, long I stood there, wondering, fearing, doubting, dreaming dreams no mortal ever dared to dream before
--Edgar Allan Poe.


I became insane, with long intervals of horrible sanity.
--Edgar Allan Poe

your welcome

on Nov. 24 2010 at 12:56 pm
alanacarlene DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
55 articles 15 photos 592 comments

Favorite Quote:
Silence screams too honestly and loudly.
-Alex (aka GangstaEyes)
Freedom is the freedom to say that two plus two equals four.
-Winston Smith '1984'
Don't go wishin' your life away...
-Daddy S2
"What a drag it was to be limited by reality."

Awwwww thank you SOOOOO SO INCREDIBLY much!!! You made me smile! You made my heart smile too <:)3!!!! This means a lot to me! Thanks again

on Nov. 24 2010 at 12:54 pm
alanacarlene DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
55 articles 15 photos 592 comments

Favorite Quote:
Silence screams too honestly and loudly.
-Alex (aka GangstaEyes)
Freedom is the freedom to say that two plus two equals four.
-Winston Smith '1984'
Don't go wishin' your life away...
-Daddy S2
"What a drag it was to be limited by reality."

Oooh yeah dang I hate when that happens!!!  Thanks for telling me haha I'm glad you like it!!!!!

on Nov. 23 2010 at 10:34 pm
Alcanno DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
59 articles 0 photos 670 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you love life, don't waste time, for time is what life is
made up of."

-- Bruce Lee

Whoa Alana! This is definitely your best piece thus far, in my opinion. The imagery and flow is so amazing and powerful and draws you in. This opened my eyes to see things like I had never considered or imagined...

 

Like I LOOOOOOVE the part

"Or have you ever tasted his love mixed in with every kiss?

Have you ever tasted love drifting through the air?

And if you haven't, one day we'll all taste the love so fair."

 

I'm speechless. Keep writing, this gave me chills and really made me think! Love ya girlie! :) Great stuff!!! :)


on Nov. 23 2010 at 10:01 pm
Skullcuffz SILVER, Waupaca, Wisconsin
6 articles 6 photos 32 comments

Favorite Quote:
Deep into that darkness peering, long I stood there, wondering, fearing, doubting, dreaming dreams no mortal ever dared to dream before
--Edgar Allan Poe.


I became insane, with long intervals of horrible sanity.
--Edgar Allan Poe

night** correction typing not my specialty. :)

on Nov. 23 2010 at 9:59 pm
Skullcuffz SILVER, Waupaca, Wisconsin
6 articles 6 photos 32 comments

Favorite Quote:
Deep into that darkness peering, long I stood there, wondering, fearing, doubting, dreaming dreams no mortal ever dared to dream before
--Edgar Allan Poe.


I became insane, with long intervals of horrible sanity.
--Edgar Allan Poe

this is amazing i like it alot keep up the good work one day you might end up on the radio. my favorite part is "the stars and moon and might surround you, shedding light and mysterious night surround you,"


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