Magazine, website & books written by teens since 1989

Little daisy flower

Custom User Avatar
More by this author
Little daisy flower,
you smile up at me
begging to be picked
and brought home.
How could I do that to you,
little daisy flower?
How could I shorten YOUR life?
Your life is beautiful
and does not deserve to end.





Join the Discussion

This article has 5 comments. Post your own now!

Amai-kunThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
today at 9:29 pm
Very sweet. It certainly brought a smile to my face. I think the only thing I would suggest would be to work on the rhythm a bit.
 
Medina D. said...
Aug. 9, 2011 at 9:51 pm
So unique :o I like it very much
 
moon_beam said...
Mar. 14, 2011 at 10:39 am
Is this about my problem
 
SpringRayynThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Mar. 14, 2011 at 10:19 pm
This was written in the summer before I met you. So it couldn't have been about you. It was about my thoughts and a daisy in the middle of a baseball feild.
 
minnieokie said...
Oct. 29, 2010 at 1:55 pm
I too am torn with the same thoughts at times.  Simple but nice work.
 
bRealTime banner ad on the left side
Site Feedback