Little daisy flower

October 6, 2010
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Little daisy flower,
you smile up at me
begging to be picked
and brought home.
How could I do that to you,
little daisy flower?
How could I shorten YOUR life?
Your life is beautiful
and does not deserve to end.

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Amai-kun This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 22, 2015 at 9:29 pm
Very sweet. It certainly brought a smile to my face. I think the only thing I would suggest would be to work on the rhythm a bit.
Medina D. said...
Aug. 9, 2011 at 9:51 pm
So unique :o I like it very much
moon_beam said...
Mar. 14, 2011 at 10:39 am
Is this about my problem
SpringRayyn replied...
Mar. 14, 2011 at 10:19 pm
This was written in the summer before I met you. So it couldn't have been about you. It was about my thoughts and a daisy in the middle of a baseball feild.
minnieokie said...
Oct. 29, 2010 at 1:55 pm
I too am torn with the same thoughts at times.  Simple but nice work.
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