Broken Girl

October 5, 2010
By YourNightmare BRONZE, Cincinnati, Ohio
YourNightmare BRONZE, Cincinnati, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
The best revenge is bettering yourself
-Zacky Vengeance

A broken girl with broken hair
A broken soul in a broken chair
She left her heart in the breaker’s hands
The hands of fate her only chance

A single tear rolls down her cheek
As she takes the beating, worn and weak
It seems her suffering will never end
Her wounded soul will never mend

She moves to close the final step
Gazing into the oceans depth
With one last breathe she says goodbye
To the cold cold world she left behind

The icy cold consumes her pain
It makes her numb
It makes her sane
For the first time in her life
The truth cuts through her like a knife

But it seems she has finally escaped
Replaced with black is white
All wrongs fade to right

A new and accepting place
Her mother’s warm embrace.

No longer alone
She’s home.

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This article has 2 comments.

on Oct. 15 2010 at 9:45 pm
amthp347 SILVER, Oakley, California
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Wow great job. It's so sad yet so poetic and beautiful. Simply amazing

on Oct. 15 2010 at 12:11 am
jessiejeannx3 BRONZE, Mandeville, Louisiana
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This is so amazing.<3

im like in love. js.<3333<3333

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