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I loved

I picked you up
On an old back road
Hung out for a while
Laughed and joked

We got closer and closer
Each passing day
And I always smiled
When you were coming my way

And I loved
Caming and singing songs
And I loved
Stayin out all night long
And I loved...

Then something happened
That changed how i felt
You laid your head on my shoulder
Then I began to melt

I looked in your eyes
And thats when i knew
That being friends
Was threw

And I loved
Texting you "Babe I love you goodnight"
And I loved
The "I love you more fight"
And I loved
(Break)

Then you got in your dads car
Without saying goodbye
And as he drove away
A peice of me died

'Cause I loved
Holding your hand and kissing your cheek
And I loved
Seeing you every day of the week
I loved...

And as you faded away
Out of the light...
I cried.....



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pinkypromise23 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Oct. 11, 2010 at 10:18 am:
aw this is so sad): why would your mom yell at you about it though? hmm.
 
jhsironmen12This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Oct. 11, 2010 at 12:46 pm :

loonngg story haha.

 

 
pinkypromise23 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Oct. 12, 2010 at 5:34 am :
ookay thenn.
 
jhsironmen12This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Oct. 12, 2010 at 1:58 pm :
I'm sure you dont wanna hear it
 
pinkypromise23 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Oct. 12, 2010 at 8:18 pm :
i wanna hear it if you wanna tell me.
 
ShelbyLynn12 replied...
Oct. 13, 2010 at 12:27 pm :
honestly mind your own business...tell her and ill kill you :)
 
ShelbyLynn12 replied...
Oct. 13, 2010 at 12:28 pm :
ok ill be reallllllly mad haha not to the point of killing though but realllllllly realllly mad
 
jhsironmen12This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Oct. 13, 2010 at 12:39 pm :
asy jeesh she doesnt know.
 
pinkypromise23 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Oct. 13, 2010 at 2:55 pm :
umm...okayy...jeez..
 
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