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A Sight Unseen.

Give me something for this pain.
Just to numb this feeling.
I'm silent on the outside.
But on the inside I'm still screaming.

Someone Stop the bleeding.

The path we walk is in the wrong direction.
Tell me theres a reason to get back on my feet and take another step.
To contenue on this path to ruin.

And all this time I've forced back all these tears.
I'VE BEEN SCREAMING ALL OF THESE YEARS!

And I've lost all my faith in mankind.
I've left all my beleifs behind.
You claim to have the goal in sight.
But it's clear to me that your blind.

How can you ask me to just forget?
all the things you've done without regret.
all the twisted words that you said.
All the empty promises Buried in your head.

Your hands are Stained with blood thats long since dried.
Will we do nothing to stop the rising tide?
Stumble blindly untill we collide?

How can I take another breath.
When It"s life itself that scares me to death.

Give something for the pain.
Just to numb this feeling.
I'm silent on the outside.
But on the inside I'm still screaming.

Someone stop the bleeding.

Don't Ask Me To Just Forget.



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ToranThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Feb. 17, 2012 at 8:47 am:
"How can I take another breath. When It"s life itself that scares me to death." I think this was my favorite. This song really connects to me, so thanks for writing
 
A_Fate_UnknownThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Feb. 17, 2012 at 10:18 pm :
This one in particular was inspired by one of my personal heros, Tim Mcilrath. That line is pretty similar to one in his songs and it really connected with me as well.
 
ToranThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Feb. 20, 2012 at 5:45 pm :
Yeah, I can see why:)
 
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Aftershock said...
Jun. 30, 2011 at 4:00 pm:
For some reason I can't get enough of your lyrics. Your really good.
 
A_Fate_UnknownThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jul. 31, 2011 at 5:39 pm :
Haha thank you guys :)
 
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A_Fate_UnknownThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Oct. 4, 2010 at 8:51 pm:
comments and critiscism welcome
 
far.from.you. replied...
Apr. 20, 2011 at 12:10 pm :
oh my god....this is amazing.. im speechles(: lol.
 
A_Fate_UnknownThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Oct. 4, 2011 at 3:31 pm :
This is probobly one of my best peices so im glad you liked it :)
 
SuNshiNe007 replied...
Mar. 8, 2012 at 8:34 am :
Wow, this is amazing! And I can't believe I just found this one, it must have been trying to hide from me..Or maybe its just my blondness that wouldnt let me see this one here..lol.. Amazing Job, and I think I'll have to agree with you! I love it!
 
A_Fate_UnknownThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Mar. 12, 2012 at 11:30 am :
lol. thanks sunshine. :P
 
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