What Lies Behind Her Eyes

August 11, 2010
By TSmitty247 GOLD, Saugus, Massachusetts
TSmitty247 GOLD, Saugus, Massachusetts
14 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
A wise man once said "A person is smart, but people are stupid"
"Semper Fi"
"What doesn't Kill you makes you Stronger"
"Talk Shit Get Hit"
"Is this the Real Ceasers Palace"


(Verse 1)
She's all sad
After a horrible day
Doesn't know if she will make it through today
With tears running down her face
And her heart screaming in hate
She wants to cut to drive the sad away
To get rid of her pain on this day
With all the options that come of this
There isn't one that is the best

(Chorus)
She's all down and depressed
Her life is nothing, but a mess
The black mascara is all wrecked
Her wrists are all cut up and red
Her path is fading to black
She finds relief in the attack

She's all down and depressed
Her life is nothing, but a mess
The black mascara is all wrecked
Her wrists are all cut up and red
Her path is fading to black
She finds relief in the attack

(Verse 2)
She can't find any love
All she finds is being made fun of
Her tears are soon washed away
But the blood on the carpet makes a nasty stain
The depression brings her down
Like you see when rain falls to the ground
Which evaporates from the shine
Wear her pain lies the sun will never shine

(Chorus)
She's all down and depressed
Her life is nothing, but a mess
The black mascara is all wrecked
Her wrists are all cut up and red
Her path is fading to black
She finds relief in the attack

She's all down and depressed
Her life is nothing, but a mess
The black mascara is all wrecked
Her wrists are all cut up and red
Her path is fading to black
She finds relief in the attack

(Verse 3)
She takes her name in vain
Her heart that cries in pain
During the mist of all of this
Out of her top drawer comes a shiny .44
The all of a sudden she screams
I can't Take this anymore
And pulls the trigger, but draws a blank
When about to try once more
The boy that loves her flies through the door
And promises her it will get better
She kisses him and holds him soo tight

(Verse 4)
She's getting better by the day
Each time the sunrises there is a smile on her face
A tiny bit she tells herself in the mirror each day I get better as I heal my pain
So out the window with the blade
And to that her path is coming back
No more self inflicted attacks


The author's comments:
This is the best piece i think i have ever wrote

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on Feb. 17 2011 at 6:06 pm
brianna.e BRONZE, Salem, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
“To laugh often and much, to win the respect of intelligent people and the affection of children, to earn the appreciation of honest critics and endure the betrayal of false friends, to appreciate beauty, to find the best in others, to leave the world a bit better, whether by a healthy child, a garden patch… to know even one life has breathed easier because you have lived. This is to have succeeded!” – Emerson

KISS ME! hehe <3 

on Feb. 16 2011 at 5:41 pm
TSmitty247 GOLD, Saugus, Massachusetts
14 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
A wise man once said "A person is smart, but people are stupid"
"Semper Fi"
"What doesn't Kill you makes you Stronger"
"Talk Shit Get Hit"
"Is this the Real Ceasers Palace"

I love you to briiii <3

on Feb. 15 2011 at 7:28 pm
brianna.e BRONZE, Salem, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
“To laugh often and much, to win the respect of intelligent people and the affection of children, to earn the appreciation of honest critics and endure the betrayal of false friends, to appreciate beauty, to find the best in others, to leave the world a bit better, whether by a healthy child, a garden patch… to know even one life has breathed easier because you have lived. This is to have succeeded!” – Emerson

<3 i love youuuu Bestie! 

on Sep. 13 2010 at 3:15 pm
TSmitty247 GOLD, Saugus, Massachusetts
14 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
A wise man once said "A person is smart, but people are stupid"
"Semper Fi"
"What doesn't Kill you makes you Stronger"
"Talk Shit Get Hit"
"Is this the Real Ceasers Palace"

thank you every1 for who had read this

on Sep. 6 2010 at 2:45 pm
mskullgirl GOLD, Waban, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
All that we see or seem is but a dream within a dream -Edgar Allen Poe

emos everywhere are going to love this

on Sep. 3 2010 at 10:27 am
krystal,with,a,kay BRONZE, Thornton, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
"Love never fails"

this poem is very deep it brought tears to my eyes very detail it was grate my fav

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on Sep. 3 2010 at 7:48 am
AlyssaNeal, Spotsylvania, Virginia
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this is such a beautiful poem, very deep and depressing, but just by reading it i feel like i know what your going through, and i love that about your writing !

 


on Sep. 1 2010 at 6:38 pm
Zazawish777 GOLD, KC, MO, Missouri
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life isn't passing me by, it's trying to run me over!

i love this! i get this! 5 out of 5 stars!  please rate and comment on my stuff to!




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