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Waiting on the Day

August 11, 2010
By inspire13 BRONZE, Manassas, Virginia
inspire13 BRONZE, Manassas, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
Patience is a virtue


Wet flowers on a rainy day
I think of you when the sky is grey
I sit and try to find another way
Not to feel all alone

When you walk you stop and smile at me
You’re the one as far as I can see
But you can’t tell me if you wanna be
A friend or something more

My heart can only take so much pain
Wanna find the reasons
Through all the seasons
Seems love is a lost melody

It’s me against the world and I know it
I’m losing my mind and I show it
Waiting on the day love will find me again
The storm is yet to pass and I feel it
Empty spaces fill my head I can’t seal it
Waiting on the day love will find me again
Again


Still waters when you hear me cry
Don’t need life just running by
If I want it I will have to try
Love myself and spread my wings

So I’m left thinking I can sore
I don’t feel alone anymore
I like what life’s worth living for
Free yourself and let love be

It’s me against the world and I know it
I’m losing my mind and I show it
Waiting on the day love will find me again
The storm is yet to pass and I feel it
Empty spaces fill my head I can’t seal it
Waiting on the day love will find me again
Waiting on the day love will find me again


The author's comments:
this song came to me one saturday afternoon after it had stormed outside. i sat on my front porch and the words just came out

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jes.si.cuh said...
on Sep. 14 2010 at 7:29 am
This poem was really good. I shared it with my creative writing class and everybody could related to it. Keep up the good work :)

on Sep. 5 2010 at 9:39 pm
rubber_ducky SILVER, Kings Park, New York
9 articles 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you were my husband, I'd poison your tea." "And if you were my wife, I'd drink it." ~Winston Churchill and some Lady in the streets of London

This is so good! You're very skilled!

inspire13 said...
on Sep. 5 2010 at 12:43 am
thank you so much for the comments!! and yeah ill for sure check out your work danica:)

Danica SILVER said...
on Sep. 4 2010 at 7:45 pm
Danica SILVER, Avondale, Arizona
7 articles 0 photos 105 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It is our choices, that show who we truly are, far more than our abilities." -- Albus Dumbledore

This is amazing! It sounds like something you'd hear on the radio. I'd love it if you checked out my work sometime! :)

on Sep. 3 2010 at 6:14 pm
dizzydoo BRONZE, Grand Mound, Iowa
3 articles 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
Realized today that the evening news always starts with "good evening" then proceeds to tell you why its not

i really liked the song, i could really hear it in my head

on Sep. 2 2010 at 6:09 pm
TheOnlyWritician GOLD, Clermont, Florida
11 articles 0 photos 52 comments

Favorite Quote:
We loved with a love that was more than love. -Edgar Allen Poe

this is a great song. I like it and give it five stars!

on Sep. 2 2010 at 9:16 am
Kalibaby BRONZE, Amherst, Virginia
1 article 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
"Don't let anyone tell you, you aren't beautiful"

I love this !