I Can't Take Back

Falling faster past the broken lies,

I'm not aware, but time just flies

I'm sitting here flustered and uneasy,

Without you I feel broken and so measley

I sat at home and cried my eyes out today,

Theres nothing I can do to make you feel okay.


I've lost my way, nothing I can say,

Would make you change your mind

I'm alone, awake, a fake, just one mistake,

I can't take back.(2x)

To you


Intrusively ironic it must be,

Theres nothing I can do to make you see

I'm certanly outrageous and vindictive,

I can't forget, your loves addictive

This game I played I was the user,

Your the winner, I'm the loser.


I've lost my way, nothing I can say,

Would make you change your mind

I'm alone, awake, a fake, just one mistake,

I can't take back.(2x)

To you


Terifyingly teriffic it must seem,

Within my mind this will always deem

I knew this would never stay intact,

It was a matter of time that I lacked

You know the truth and I will suffer

What I did, I failed, and now your Tougher.


I've lost my way, nothing I can say,

Would make you change your mind

I'm alone, awake, a fake, just one mistake,

I can't take back.(2x)

No I can't take back,

To you





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Singyurheartxout said...
Aug. 21, 2010 at 9:13 am
This was really good. I hope you keep writing (like if you stopped or something). No doubt, I can really relate to this, Almost a million times. I really liked it a lot.
 
drifting_mind replied...
Aug. 21, 2010 at 3:56 pm

Thank you :) I plan on writing another soon

 

 

 
dreamer9492 said...
Aug. 20, 2010 at 7:18 pm
i like this. i can relate to this right now! good job! =) can you comment some of my stuff? i'd greatly
 
talking-with-silence said...
Aug. 19, 2010 at 9:37 pm
I like it. I can relate 200%. it was very good. :) i can't think of anything you could improve.Way to go :)
 
drifting_mind replied...
Aug. 20, 2010 at 4:08 pm
thank you :) ill write another one when i get the chance
 
talking-with-silence replied...
Aug. 20, 2010 at 4:13 pm
Sweet thanks.
 
drifting_mind said...
Aug. 19, 2010 at 8:42 pm
aww thank you :)
 
=)=)=)=) said...
Aug. 19, 2010 at 4:30 pm
aww, youre so talented! i enjoyed reading this poem/song a lot! im so glad you decided to post it! keep up the awesome work! :D
 
jazzy2classy said...
Aug. 19, 2010 at 1:56 pm
this is so good and whoever wrote this has talent and i give you your props
 
drifting_mind replied...
Aug. 19, 2010 at 8:41 pm
thank you :) i wrote this
 
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