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I'm Here Until

By , Canoga Park, CA
Four weeks and a bottle of pomegranate
It ain't easy writin' you a song, doggone it
I swear, it's 12:47 on the eve of your birthday
And all's I got are three small words to say

I'm here until
I'm here until
I'm here until

Well our bond's not subject to time
So it's tough finding words to rhyme
With an indefinite, an unknown, a whatever, a whenever

While coming up with this tune:
Broke my fourth string
Cramped my fourth finger (left hand)
But if I had to give our friendship's warranty a number, it'd be
Forever
It'd be forever





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platypi4life said...
Aug. 13, 2010 at 11:40 pm
i did not like this one either. but i do feel the vibe. i write the same kind, just...better :)
 
crubs3 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 9, 2010 at 8:55 pm
So great!!! i can really get a clear pic!! If you could please comment and rate my work that would be amazing!! thanks and ur so good!!!
 
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